Question

8．假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)（Ming Qi Middle School）高三（1）班的通訊員李華，你將為你班班長王華寫一份事跡報道，競選學(xué)校的好班長稱號（Mr．/Mrs．Monitor）．你的參選報道必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
1、簡單介紹你班班長（王華）；
2、描述班長所做的一件事；
3、說明推選班長參賽的理由．

Answer 1

分析 首先要注意審題，把題目的意思看清楚．這個題目的意思是說簡單介紹你班班長（王華）；描述班長所做的一件事；說明推選班長參賽的理由．在第一段里，大家要開門見山，清楚明確地點題，然后用一個具體的事例來支持自己的觀點．注意事例一定要和自己表達(dá)的中心思想緊密結(jié)合．并且事例要寫出時間，事情的經(jīng)過、發(fā)展和結(jié)果．最后一段歸納總結(jié)，呼應(yīng)或升華文章中心．
  亮點部分
  As the monitor in my class，Wang Hua is tall and looks very confident who is always ready to help other students or teachers．（高分句型）
What impressed me most for our class is still kept in our mind．（高分句型）
Seeing that there was no sign for our classmates'participating in the task，Wang Hua stood up，beginning to clean the classroom．（高分句型）
Although there are still some meaningful things which Wang Hua has done for us，I think this story can clearly show his good personalities to compete for the Mr．Monitor．（高分句型）

解答 As the monitor in my class，Wang Hua is tall and looks very confident who is always ready to help other students or teachers．（高分句型）Meanwhile，he has a strong sense of duty．What impressed me most for our class is still kept in our mind．（高分句型）
     Several months ago，after we finished the final exam in the first term of the senior three，our teacher asked some volunteers to clean the classroom．Seeing that there was no sign for our classmates'participating in the task，Wang Hua stood up，beginning to clean the classroom．（高分句型）Then，it is certain that we were so touched by his unselfish behavior that almost all of my classmates began to help him to clean the classroom．Although there are still some meaningful things which Wang Hua has done for us，I think this story can clearly show his good personalities to compete for the Mr．Monitor．（高分句型）
     His sense of duty is the most important thing that a good monitor should have．Also，he is wise enough to encourage other people to participate in a task．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧