Question

【題目】下圖反映的是國家近十年來對不同類型能源利用比重變化的調(diào)査結果，請根據(jù)圖表顯示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇150字左右的短文：

你的短文應包含以下內(nèi)容：

1. 描述圖表中反映的主要變化；

2. 分析這種變化對社會和環(huán)境產(chǎn)生的影響；

3. 根據(jù)你所學到的相關知識，談談今后對不同類型能源利用的建議。

注意:1. 不必寫標題；

2. 可參照圖表適當發(fā)揮；

3. 作文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】The pie charts present the changes of the percentages of the energy produced from various sources in our country from 2007 to 2017.

Apparently, oil was the most dominant source from which the energy was produced, although its percentage dropped from 52% to 39%. Likewise, nuclear also declined, becoming the third primary source of energy. The percentage of natural gas, on the other hand, witnessed the most noticeable increase during the period, rising from 13% to 23%.

Coal and other renewable resources saw the rise of 5% and 3% respectively. Interestingly, the proportion of the energy produced from the hydrogen, though not widely used, remained stable. Overall, this trend helps guarantee sustainable economic growth, improve the environment and reduce the cost of living.

To my mind, we should enforce the use of other renewable resources such as solar energy, wind energy and water energy to protect our limited resources.

【解析】本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文寫作。

第一段：概述圖表顯示的內(nèi)容�？梢杂孟逻@些句子開頭:In the picture above we can see...; There is a cartoon about...; As we can see in the picture...; From the picture, we can see that...; 或者It can be seen/concluded from the picture that...等等。第二段：描述圖片反映的國家近十年來對不同類型能源利用比重變化的調(diào)査結果，這一段是重點，要詳寫。第三段：簡單概述自己的觀點，總結全文。切記一定要充分理解圖片內(nèi)容，注意上下文要連貫，要完整。同時注意綜合運用語法與句法結構，按照行文邏輯組織語言，寫作時要準確運用時態(tài)。盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，不要刻意追求運用高級、新穎的詞匯，復雜句型等語法結構，忽略了與原文語言環(huán)境的符合度和連貫度。最后也要注意不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯誤。

【亮點說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，上下文連貫有邏輯性，使用了較多高級表達方式：

The pie charts present the changes of the percentages of the energy produced from various sources in our country from 2007 to 2017.使用了過去分詞作定語；Apparently, oil was the most dominant source from which the energy was produced, although its percentage dropped from 52% to 39%.使用了定語從句和狀語從句；The percentage of natural gas, on the other hand, witnessed the most noticeable increase during the period, rising from 13% to 23%.使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；Interestingly, the proportion of the energy produced from the hydrogen, though not widely used, remained stable.使用了狀語從句的省略。總之，范文用詞準確，思路清晰，過渡詞的使用增強了文章的連貫性。