Question

15．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：把缺詞處加個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
   3．請?jiān)诖痤}卷原文上修改．
In the summer holiday，we traveled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there．It's a long and bored journey．But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city．It's such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it．The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue．If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face．The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship．You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted．Besides，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street．Your can never be too carefully when crossing the street．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹青島街道干凈，空氣清新，真是一個(gè)美麗的城市．但那兒的人開車太快，過馬路時(shí)再怎么小心也不為過．

解答 In the summer holiday，we traveled to Qingdao and paid∧visit to my uncle there．It's a long and bored journey．But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city．It's such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it．The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue．If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face．The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship．You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted．Besides，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street．Your can never be too carefully when crossing the street．
詳解：
 1．加a 考查冠詞．pay a visit to意為"參觀某地或拜訪某人"，是固定短語．
2．bored改為boring 考查詞語用法．bored意為"厭煩的"，表示人的感受，boring意為"令人厭煩的"，形容事物的性質(zhì)．此處修飾journey，表示"令人厭煩的旅行"．
3．fall改為fell  考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語the moment I arrived，表示發(fā)生在過去的事情，謂語語動(dòng)詞用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．  
4．such改為so  考查固定搭配．so和such都意為"如此"，其正確語序?yàn)閟o+adj．+a+n．；such+a+adj．+n．．此處要用so．
5．cleaning改為clean 考查形容詞．clean是形容詞，意為"干凈的"，做are的表語．
6．去掉to 考查動(dòng)詞用法．feel sb．/sth．doing sth．意為"感覺某人正在做某事"，doing做feel的賓語補(bǔ)足語，to是多余的，要去掉．   
7．far改為long 考查固定短語．根據(jù)句意：只要天氣允許，你可以去釣魚． as long as意為"只要"，是固定短語．  
8．Besides改為However 考查副詞．however表示轉(zhuǎn)折，尤其用于談及一個(gè)既成事實(shí)時(shí)，表示轉(zhuǎn)折，其意為"可是""仍然"等．可放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗號與句子其他成分隔開．
9．driver改為drivers  考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．該處指青島所有的司機(jī)，故用名詞復(fù)數(shù)．
10．carefully改為careful 考查句意理解．由上文可知，那兒的人開車太快．所以過馬路時(shí)再怎么小心也不為過．can't be too+adj．意為"再…也不為過，越…越好"．

點(diǎn)評 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．