Question

15．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一（1）班的學(xué)生李華，你的英國筆友Chris剛剛轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)，感到一切都很陌生．他在郵件中向你詢問如何盡快融入新環(huán)境．請你根據(jù)以下信息回信．
1．多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；
2．積極參加學(xué)校活動；
3．向老師尋求幫助．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)．
Dear Chris，
                                                     
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封書信．感根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱來敘述，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容主要包括：一 點明寫信的目的；二提出建議，包括多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；積極參加學(xué)�；顒�；向老師尋求幫助．三表達(dá)意愿．
高分句型：
1．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．句子里it做形式主語，代指to take part in more activities；which引導(dǎo)定語從句，先行詞是 activities．
第二，多參加活動對你來說是個好主意，這些活動包括和其他同學(xué)的合作和交流，因此對于發(fā)展友好關(guān)系有好處．
2．Lastly，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking your teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．句子里，faced with 做狀語，和主語you之間是被動關(guān)系；who引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞your teachers．
最后，面對難題，你可以向你的老師請教，他們通常能夠給你提出一些合理化的建議，

解答 Dear Tony，
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful to you．（點明寫信的目的）
First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．【高分句型一】Lastly，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking your teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．【高分句型二】（提出建議，包括多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；積極參加學(xué)校活動；向老師尋求幫助．）
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know．（表達(dá)意愿）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 這是提綱類作文．
審題時，要審查書面表達(dá)題干中隱含的讀者對象和撰寫人，即搞清楚此篇文章是"由誰寫給誰"的．寫稿人是誰一般都已明確指出，給出形式假設(shè)環(huán)境中的"某人"，如"假設(shè)你是李華"，寫作時即用第一人稱"我"，即李華．而讀者對象有時沒有明示，要考生自己去進(jìn)行判斷．