Question

英語課上,老師要求同桌同學相互修改作文。假設以下小作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（^），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
3．必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。
My grandmother is a village woman. She is already in her seventy. Although she received little school education, but she is aware that knowledge is of great important to young people. When my father was young, my grandmother took good care him so that my father could cost more time on his studies. Now, she often encouraged me to study hard. This summer she was bad ill in bed. When I visited her during the summer holiday, I found her sitting in bed, made new shoes for me! I was so deeply moving that tears came to my eyes. My grandmother is so a kind and hardworking woman. I’ll respect and love her forever.

Answer 1

【小題1】seventy-----seventies
【小題2】but去掉
【小題3】important­----importance
【小題4】took good care^ of
【小題5】cost----spend
【小題6】encouraged--- encourages
【小題7】bad---badly
【小題8】made---making
【小題9】moving---moved
【小題10】so---such

解析試題分析：文章介紹作者的奶奶，雖然她沒有接受過什么教育，但是她知道教育的重要性。
【小題1】在某人幾十歲的時候：in one’s+數字的復數：seventy-----seventies
【小題2】雖然她沒有接受過什么教育，但是她知道教育的重要性。Although不能和but連用
【小題3】be of+抽象名詞=形容詞：important­----importance
【小題4】爸爸小的時候，奶奶照顧他。took good care  of照料
【小題5】某人花時間做…，sb spend time to do sth. cost----spend
【小題6】現在她鼓勵我努力學習。時間是now，用一般現在時：encouraged--- encourages
【小題7】今年夏天她病得很重。用副詞-badly修飾ill
【小題8】我發(fā)現她坐在床上，幫我做鞋子。用現在分詞做伴隨狀語：made---making
【小題9】我被感動的流淚了。形容人用-moved
【小題10】我奶奶是如此善良和勤奮的人。So修飾形容詞或副詞，such修飾名詞woman，
考點：考查短文改錯