Question

你的澳大利亞筆友Tom發(fā)來電子郵件，向你詢問國家體育館“鳥巢”的有關(guān)信息。請你根據(jù)下列提示給Tom回一封電子郵件，簡單介紹“鳥巢”。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

	地 點	北京北部
建筑面積	5.8萬平方米，可容納9萬多名觀眾
開工/竣工時間	2003年12月－2007年
外 觀	猶如用樹枝搭成的“鳥巢”
用 途	奧運會期間可舉辦田徑、足球比賽
奧運會后將用于各類大型活動
Kofi Annan 的評價	“鳥巢”將成為奧運歷史上一個建筑奇觀

[寫作要求]

1. 只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；

2. 短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入句子總數(shù)；

3. 參考詞匯：田徑: track and field event 觀眾: spectator 建筑: architecture

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句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Dear Tom,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium — the Bird’s Nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

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I hope that my introduction will satisfy you.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium —the Bird’s Nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

The Bird’s Nest, which looks just like a bird’s nest made of tree branches and can hold about 90,000 spectators, is located in the north of Beijing and covers an area of 58,000 square meters. Its construction was started in December, 2003 and was completed in 2007. During the Olympic Games, we will host the track and field events as well as soccer matches there and after the Games it will be used for large events.

The Bird’s Nest is thought highly of by many people. Kofi Annan gave the thumbs-up to its design and said that it would be a wonder in architecture in the history of the global Games.

I hope that my introduction will satisfy you.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：你的澳大利亞筆友Tom發(fā)來電子郵件，向你詢問國家體育館“鳥巢”的有關(guān)信息。請你根據(jù)下列提示給Tom回一封電子郵件，簡單介紹“鳥巢”。 地 點：北京北部；建筑面積：5.8萬平方米，可容納9萬多名觀眾；開工/竣工時間：2003年12月－2007年；外 觀：猶如用樹枝搭成的“鳥巢”； 用 途：運

會期間可舉辦田徑、足球比賽，奧運會后將用于各類大型活動；Kofi Annan的評價：“鳥巢”將成為奧運歷史上一個建筑奇觀。要把所提示的點寫全，把漢語翻譯成通順的英語句子，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，寫作時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。寫作要求：1. 只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；

2. 短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入句子總數(shù)。

【亮點說明】The Bird’s Nest, which looks just like a bird’s nest made of tree branches and can hold about 90,000 spectators, is located in the north of Beijing and covers an area of 58,000 square meters.這句中使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句和并列謂語結(jié)構(gòu)；Its construction was started in December, 2003 and was completed in 2007.句子運用了一般過去時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)；During the Olympic Games, we will host the track and field events as well as soccer matches there and after the Games it will be used for large events.此句使用了一般將來時態(tài)的主動語態(tài)和被動語態(tài)，并巧妙地使用了并列句； The Bird’s Nest is thought highly of by many people.一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)和高級詞組的運用恰到好處；Kofi Annan gave the thumbs-up to its design and said that it would be a wonder in architecture in the history of the global Games.并列謂語和賓語從句的使用將文章推向了高潮。

考點：考查電子郵件式的話題作文。