Question

請用“中秋節(jié)的等待”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，描述下圖的內(nèi)容，并就此發(fā)表你的評論

要求：1．文章必須包括描述和評論兩部分；
2．詞數(shù)為100左右。

Answer 1

Waiting on Mid-autumn Festival
It is a quarter past nine at night. The old couple have had the reunion dinner prepared for a long time. They are sitting at the table waiting for their son, daughter-in-law and their lovely grandchildren. The dishes are gradually colding down, but they have not come yet. The grandmother stares at the door eagerly and the grandfather is making telephone calls but can not get through.
Are they too busy to come to their parents’ home to eat a dinner on Mid-autumn Festival?
It ought to be a happy day for families to get together. But like the old couple in the picture, today many old people are ignored by their children. They also need love and care. There is nothing more important than their family’s happiness for them. So every adult should try their best to spend some time with their parents and comfort their lonely heart.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，認真讀圖，可知圖畫反映了中秋節(jié)父母等待孩子回來吃飯的一個生活場景，寫作時不要僅僅對圖畫進行描述，也要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】這篇范文最大的特點是使用了詞組和句式多變： had sth done做好…，stare at 凝視，get through接通，make telephone calls 打電話，get together聚會， try their best to 盡力做…。They are sitting at the table waiting for their son, daughter-in-law and their lovely grandchildren. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， Are they too busy to come to their parents’ home to eat a dinner on Mid-autumn Festival?這句話用了too…to結(jié)構(gòu)。