Question

5．假定你是我校高三學(xué)生李華，在學(xué)�？吹饺缦峦ㄖ�，請根據(jù)通知的內(nèi)容和寫作要點向?qū)W校寫一封申請信：

HOST FAMILIES WANTED Teachers and students from Central High School phoenix will visit our school two weeks later．Host families are wanted to accommodate our friends． REQUIREMENTS： ◇Can communicate in English． ◇A SEPARATE room is a MUST． ◇A private car is preferred． If interested，please send your APPLICATION IN ENGLISH to the Office of the principal before THURSDAY．Please consult us for any further information．

寫作要點：
1．你對參與該活動的認識；
2．你的優(yōu)勢；
3．作為接待家庭的打算．
注意：
1．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)120字左右．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Three．___________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
                                                                   Yours sincerely，
      Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文為讀寫任務(wù)類作文，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱為第一人稱為主，寫作要點：1．用約30個單詞寫出上文概要；2．用約120個單詞闡述你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的理由．
（高分句型一）In addition，we can exchange our cultures and customs with each other，which will surely benefit both of us．
該句使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在句子指這件事情．
高分句型二）Not only am I skilled in English and good at communicating with foreigners freely and smoothly but also a separate room and a private car are available
句子使用了not only…but also的導(dǎo)致句式，強調(diào)了我的優(yōu)勢，即擅長用英語溝通；
高級詞匯：accommodation 食宿；exchange交換；meet all the requirements滿足所有的要求；
過渡短語：In addition另外；In brief總之；

解答 Dear sir or Madam，
     I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Three．After seeing your notice in relation to the accommodation activity，I am eager to be one of the host families．（我對活動的認識） In my view，it will offer me a chance to improve my language skills．（高分句型一）In addition，we can exchange our cultures and customs with each other，which will surely benefit both of us．What matters most is that my family can meet all the requirements．（高分句型二）Not only am I skilled in English and good at communicating with foreigners freely and smoothly but also a separate room and a private car are available．（我的優(yōu)勢） When the foreign friends settle down，I surely will show them around the interesting places in our lovely city and treat them to delicious Chinese foods of all kinds．（我的打算） In brief，I am prepared to accommodate our friends．I would be grateful if you would take my application into account．
 Yours sincerely，
Li  Hua

點評 寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．