Question

8．There are the two simple words，"if"and"what"．These two words can be used in many sentences and questions by themselves，but if you put them together，it forms a serious question，"What if…？"
This question will bring you back to a certain time in your life when you made a choice．You may not be happy with that choice today and often think about why you did it，but you made the decision because it was the best choice at that specific moment in your life．Now，years later，you start to think about that specific choice you made．You mentally struggle with yourself and consider if you could choose again，what would you do？Would it be totally different？I truly believe if you want something very much，you can do it and achieve it，because"Where there is a will，there is a way．"You can correct the mistakes of your decisions for the past，go out and find happiness in the right decisions for your future．It is never too late to do anything in life．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個詞就"人生努力永不晚"談一談你的看法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你對人生努力的理解；
（2）舉一個"大器晚成"的例子；
（3）你對實(shí)例的評價或看法．
【寫作要求】
1．作文中可以使用實(shí)例來支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容論述，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，在總結(jié)材料提供的信息的基礎(chǔ)上完成寫作，寫作內(nèi)容包括：1）你對人生努力的理解；2）舉一個"大器晚成"的例子；3）你對實(shí)例的評價或看法． 時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱用第一和第三人稱．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：so long as （只要）；As for （只要）； overcome （克服）；give up（放棄）；all over the world（遍及世界）；persistence（堅(jiān)持，毅力）；stick to （堅(jiān)持，緊跟）．
高分句型：1．This passage mainly tells us it is never too late to achieve our dreams ①so long as we have the determination，②even though some wrong decisions may have been made before．
                ①so long as 相當(dāng)于if，引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句；②even though 引導(dǎo)一個讓步狀語從句．
                 2．①No matter how many difficulties we might go through，we can overcome them②if we don't give up．
                  ①No matter 意為"不管，無論"，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句；②if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句．
                 3．It was because he never gave up that he made a fortune．
                  這是"It is/was+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that從句"的強(qiáng)調(diào)句型．

解答 This passage mainly tells us it is never too late to achieve our dreams so long as we have the determination，even though some wrong decisions may have been made before（高分句型一）．
 As for me，I believe in the old saying"Nothing is impossible．"No matter how many difficulties we might go through，we can overcome them if we don't give up（高分句型二）． Harland Sanders，who quitted school and worked on a farm at 14，became a cook and dishwasher later． He did not achieve anything until he retired and used his small retirement check to start a new business at the age of 65．Now Harland's business，Kentucky Fried Chicken，has expanded to all over the world．
That man，who failed in everything he did，refused to be a loser． I really appreciate Harland's courage and persistence．It was because he never gave up that he made a fortune（高分句型三）． There is no doubt that we can equally succeed if we stick to our dreams．

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合起來，要求考生在讀懂文章信息的基礎(chǔ)上，按照要求有條理地寫出所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，提高文章的檔次．