Question

15．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于早起有益的短文．
1、早起鍛煉可使身體健康，強(qiáng)壯．2、早起朗讀，有助于記住學(xué)過(guò)的東西．
3、可為一天的活動(dòng)做好準(zhǔn)備．4、堅(jiān)持早起對(duì)培養(yǎng)好的性格也很有益處．
注意：詞數(shù)100左右．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于早起有益的議論文．1．早起鍛煉可使身體健康、強(qiáng)壯．2．早起朗讀，有助于記住學(xué)過(guò)的東西．
3．可為一天的活動(dòng)做好準(zhǔn)備，有充足的時(shí)間洗漱、吃早餐．堅(jiān)持早起對(duì)培養(yǎng)性格也很有用．應(yīng)該用用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)．需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
亮點(diǎn)部分   It is of great importance to our health，our study and our life．（高分句型）使用be of+抽象名詞
    We can improve our health by doing morning exercises，walking，running in the open air．（高分句型）正確運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)
    If we stick to it，it will benefit us a lot，especially in our character-making．（高分句型）使用if條件句

解答 Getting up early is a good habit．It is of great importance to our health，our study and our life．（高分句型）First，it can help us to keep fit and strong．We can improve our health by doing morning exercises，walking，running in the open air．（高分句型）Second，getting up early and reading aloud can help memorize what we have learned easily．（高分句型）Third，if we get up early，we don't need to be in a hurry to go to school or work without having breakfast．So we'll have a very good mood all day．If we stick to it，it will benefit us a lot，especially in our character-making．（高分句型）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．