Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語(yǔ)為某品牌一款智能手機(jī)寫(xiě)一篇促銷(xiāo)說(shuō)明
必要性：手機(jī)是人們聯(lián)系工具之一
顏色：黑色和白色 功能：收發(fā)短信，照相，上網(wǎng)，下載音樂(lè)，瀏覽網(wǎng)頁(yè)……
其他：MP4, 自選游戲……參考詞匯：瀏覽 browse
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右   2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Answer 1

 
Thanks for choosing our smart phones. As we know, mobile phones have become the most important way of communication, with which we can get in touch with each other wherever and whenever we are.
This product for us has many different functions to meet different needs, such as sending or receiving short messages. Besides, you won’t take pains to carry your camera any more, for the mobile phone itself has one. Thus, you can take pictures whenever you like. What’s more, with the function of surfing the Internet, it allows you to browse wet pages and download what you want. It can even bring you a flood of music and movies. Most importantly, it can be used as an MP4 as well as a computer game player.
As for colors, we offer you the choice between white and black.

試題分析：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文。文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來(lái)，考生發(fā)揮的余地較小，只需要翻譯成英語(yǔ)即可，寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要把所有的要點(diǎn)都包括在內(nèi)，不要遺漏。同時(shí)注意使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，倒裝句等不同的句式，讓文章充滿(mǎn)變化，不要那么的死板。同時(shí)要使用高級(jí)的詞匯和詞組提高文章的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如thank for，get in touch with，such as，allow sb. to do，be used as，between … and …；which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句。并注意了句子的銜接如so，Besides，Thus，whenever，What’s more等等。