Question

19．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，進(jìn)入高三后你的朋友William感到壓力很大，學(xué)習(xí)效果甚微，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，幫助他放松身心，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．快樂學(xué)習(xí)，保持愉快的心情；
2．積極參加體育活動(dòng)，聽聽歌曲音樂；
3．多與同學(xué)交流，互相鼓勵(lì)．
注意：1．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，詞數(shù)100詞左右．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear William，
Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three．
__________________________
                                                      Yours Sincerely，
                                                       Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料，給William寫一封電子郵件，幫助他放松身心，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率．要點(diǎn)包括：1．快樂學(xué)習(xí)，保持愉快的心情；2．積極參加體育活動(dòng)，聽聽歌曲音樂；3．多與同學(xué)交流，互相鼓勵(lì)．．寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：First of all（首先）；remove（移動(dòng)，去除）；keep up （保持，維持）；take part in （參加）；build up（樹立，增強(qiáng)，積累）；provide sb with sth（為某人提供某物）；encourage sb to do sth（鼓勵(lì)某人做某事）．
高分句型：1．Another way ①to keep up our spirits is ②to take part in sports．
                  ①不定式短語to keep up our spirits 作定語修飾主語Another way；②不定式短語to take part in sports在句中作表語．
                 2．①Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us with time to relax and fresh our mind，②making us memorize things faster and longer．
                   ①Not only 位于句首，句子用倒裝；②現(xiàn)在分詞短語在句中作狀語．
                  3．Through the communication，we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．
                   which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞which指代前句提到的內(nèi)容．

解答 書面表達(dá)
Dear William，
  Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three． Here is some advice on how to study effectively．
  First of all，learn in a relaxing way．This will remove our pressure，making study an easy job．Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports（高分句型一）．Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us with time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer（高分句型二）．Music，too，is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better．
  Last but not least，we should exchange ideas with our classmates．Through the communication，we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study（高分句型三）．Hope these can benefit you．
  Best wishes!
                                                  Yours Sincerely，
                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)的提煉要全，關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對(duì)，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．