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5．假設(shè)你是李華，你是英國筆友Bruce的父母因為工作調(diào)動（job transfer）要到你所在的城市工作，他們計劃搬到你所在的小區(qū)住，Bruce寫信詢問小區(qū)情況，請你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信．要點如下：
1．表示歡迎；  
2．你所在小區(qū)適宜居住的理由（至少兩條）．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Bruce，
I am so pleased to receive your letter．I am even happier to hear that you and your family will move to our neighborhood next month．（高分句型一）
You are really going to enjoy staying in our neighborhood．Firstly，it is a wonderful，peaceful and clean area with a lot of greenery and open spaces to play in．Secondly，people in my neighborhood are friendly and easy-going．Thirdly，the houses are beautiful and I hold the belief that your parents will find the house to their taste．（高分句型二）Fourthly，there are many nice shops where we can do some shopping together．（高分句型三）Last but not least，it is convenient to travel from here to other areas of the city．You will definitely be happy here．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你是英國筆友Bruce的父母因為工作調(diào)動（job transfer）要到你所在的城市工作，他們計劃搬到你所在的小區(qū)住，Bruce寫信詢問小區(qū)情況，請你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：表示歡迎；  你所在小區(qū)適宜居住的理由（至少兩條）． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；Fourthly第四；Last but not least最后同樣最重要；
I am even happier to hear that you and your family will move to our neighborhood next month．（高分句型一）
Thirdly，the houses are beautiful and I hold the belief that your parents will find the house to their taste．（高分句型二）
Fourthly，there are many nice shops where we can do some shopping together．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Bruce，
      I am so pleased to receive your letter．I am even happier to hear that you and your family will move to our neighborhood next month．（高分句型一）
      You are really going to enjoy staying in our neighborhood．Firstly，it is a wonderful，peaceful and clean area with a lot of greenery and open spaces to play in．Secondly，people in my neighborhood are friendly and easy-going．Thirdly，the houses are beautiful and I hold the belief that your parents will find the house to their taste．（高分句型二）Fourthly，there are many nice shops where we can do some shopping together．（高分句型三）Last but not least，it is convenient to travel from here to other areas of the city．You will definitely be happy here．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．