16．據(jù)報(bào)道，在我國(guó)仍有很多山區(qū)的孩子因?yàn)榧彝ヘ毟F而上不起學(xué)．你們班就如何幫助這些孩子上學(xué)進(jìn)行了討論．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你把你們的建議寫(xiě)成一封信寄給Teens的編輯，希望他能夠呼吁更多的人參與這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．收集舊課本和衣服；
2．你的建議，至少兩條；
3．呼吁更多人幫助他們．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Editor，
I'm a senior high school student．
             ．
Yours sincerely，Li Hua．

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息據(jù)報(bào)道，在我國(guó)仍有很多山區(qū)的孩子因?yàn)榧彝ヘ毟F而上不起學(xué)．你們班就如何幫助這些孩子上學(xué)進(jìn)行了討論．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你把你們的建議寫(xiě)成一封信寄給Teens的編輯，希望他能夠呼吁更多的人參與這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)．，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
（高分句型一）First and foremost，some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused．
該句使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，即old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent；還有so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句；
（高分句型二）Above all，we should give them respect，never looking down upon them because they are poor
looking down 是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)表示伴隨狀況，we和look之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故使用現(xiàn)在分詞；because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句；
高級(jí)詞匯和句式：First and foremost、What's more、Above all；As far as I'm concerned就我所知；We would appreciate it if you 如果你能…我們會(huì)很感激的；look down upon 看不起；appeal to 呼吁；

解答 Dear Editor，
 I'm a senior high school student． It's reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still have no access to school because of poverty．Last week，our class held a discussion about how to help them to go t o school and live a happy childhood．
      Here are our suggestions．（高分句型一）First and foremost，some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused．As far as I'm concerned，we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those children in need．What's more，it's also very important to appeal to more people and social organizations to help and care for those poor children．（高分句型二）Above all，we should give them respect，never looking down upon them because they are poor．（自己的建議）
     We would appreciate it if you can，through the Teens，increase public awareness of the poor children's living conditions and call on more people to help them．（發(fā)出呼吁）
                                                                                                     Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                      Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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