3.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
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刪除:把多余的詞用斜線 (\) 劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每 處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
     2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
On my way to the bookstore,I noticed a group of people surrounded two anxious foreigners.I stopped and found that they were tourist from Canada who careless left a very important wallet in a taxi.I accompanied them to the nearest police station and without their help,we got in touch with the taxi company.We told a moment ago a driver had just turned in a wallet and then a policeman drive us to the company without delay.The two Canadians happily claimed their wallet,that contained their passports,flight tickets,some cash or credit cards.They expressed our thanks to me.I feel it really a great pleasure to help the others.

分析 作者在本文中講述了在去書店的路上遇到兩位丟失錢包的外國人,在作者的幫助下,兩位外國人終于找回來錢包,作者也由此感覺到幫助別人是一件快樂的事情.

解答 On my way to the bookstore,I noticed a group of people surrounded two anxious foreigners.I stopped and found that they were tourist from Canada who carelessleft a very important wallet in a taxi.I accompanied them to the nearest police station and without their help,we got in touch with the taxi company.We∧told a moment ago a driver had just turned in a wallet and then a policeman drive us to the company without delay.The two Canadians happily claimed their wallet,thatcontained their passports,flight tickets,some cash orcredit cards.They expressed ourthanks to me.I feel it really a great pleasure to help the others.
詳解:
1.surrounded改成surrounding;考查非謂語動詞,此處是分詞作賓語補(bǔ)足語,people與動詞surround是主謂關(guān)系,故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作賓補(bǔ).
2.tourist改成tourists;考查名詞,根據(jù)主語they可知要用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式tourists.
3.careless改成carelessly;考查副詞,此處用副詞作狀語修飾動詞left.
4.without改成with;考查句意,分析句意為"在他們的幫助下,我們…"故用with.
5.told前加上were;考查動詞的語態(tài),主語we與動詞told是動賓關(guān)系,即"我們被告知",故加系動詞were構(gòu)成被動語態(tài).
6.drive改成drove;考查動詞的時(shí)態(tài),此處的動作發(fā)生在過去,要用一般過去式.
7.that改成which;考查關(guān)系代詞,這是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句,先行詞wallet指物,故用關(guān)系代詞which.
8.or改成and;考查連詞,分析句意為"錢包里有他們的護(hù)照,機(jī)票,一些現(xiàn)金和信用卡",故用and表示并列,意為"和".
9.our改成their;考查形容詞性物主代詞,分析句意可知此處的物主代詞要與主語they保持一致,故用their.
10.去掉the;考查冠詞,此處泛指"幫助他人",沒有一個(gè)固定的范圍,不表示特指,故把定冠詞the去掉.

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯(cuò)首先快速閱讀短文,了解短文基本大意,確定文章的基本時(shí)態(tài),再運(yùn)用語法,詞匯,習(xí)慣性短語等基礎(chǔ)知識進(jìn)一步分析各個(gè)句子,找出文中的錯(cuò)誤加以修改.

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