Question

學校英語學習俱樂部正在進行以“我最喜歡的樂隊”為題的征文比賽。西域男孩(Westlife)是深受大眾歡迎的愛爾蘭男子樂隊，請根據下列表格提示完成你的參賽作品。

樂隊名稱	西域男孩(Westlife)
成員	由五位英俊男孩組成
歷史	●1998年組建 ●在愛爾蘭、英國走紅 ●在非洲、澳大利亞、亞洲受歡迎 ●1999-2005年間，制作13張唱片，在英國排名第一 ●4千萬張唱片在世界范圍內銷售 ●2012年解散
喜歡該樂隊原因	●被Seasons in the Sun這首歌打動，它詮釋了真愛的含義 ●……

注意：
1．詞數不少于60詞。
2．對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
3．文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

Answer 1

不唯一
Westlife is an Irish boy band.It has set many records in European music history and enjoys a high reputation all over the world—that is“the greatest boy band ever in history”.This fantastic band was made up of five shining guys in 1998.
Because of their handsome appearance and terrific singing,they got popular in Irish and Britain.Soon they are welcomed in Africa,Austrain and Asia.Between soon 1999 and 2005, Westlife made 13 records,standing  first on the top list in Britain.They geartly succeeded in singjing their wonderful songs.As a result,40 million albums were sold out all over the world.Personally,I was deeply touched by one of their fabulous songs“Seasons in the Sun”.This is the number one single which interprets the true meaning of love!
Although they broke up in 2012 after almost 14 years together,the guys’perseverance in chasing their dreams and fighting for their musical career gave me a strong positive push!

解析試題分析：英語寫作是一種創(chuàng)作性的學習過程。啟動知識信息儲存，構思立意，謀篇布局，遣詞造句，對語言表達的正確性和準確性、思維的邏輯性和文章的條理性都比口語要求更高。先審題，弄清寫作要求，審題是寫好作文的前提，理清思路，確定體裁、框架結構和內容。提醒考生注意時態(tài)及語態(tài)的使用。這篇短文有些意義的表達考生不好找到合適的單詞和短語，這就反映了考生的詞匯量的大小了。
考點：提綱作文。
點評：加強積累適量的詞匯、詞組和增加各種類型句子的運用。把握好各種句型和詞匯的搭配，并從各類題材和體裁著手，思考內容的連貫性，語言和句子的準確性。會使用連接詞或過渡句使句子的連接起來，讀起來流暢。