Question

3．第三節(jié)：書(shū)面表達(dá)
請(qǐng)以"One Thing I'm Proud  of"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100～120個(gè)詞的短文，記述一件你自己認(rèn)為得意的事情．要求如下：
（1）記述事情經(jīng)過(guò)；
（2）簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示．
注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
One Thing I'm Proud of．
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player．The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis．Amazed at how skilful they were，I was determined to be just as good．Later on，I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques．Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players．At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class．
I am really proud of this experience，which helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work．It also helps me better understand the proverb"Practice makes perfect．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們以"One Thing I'm Proud of"為題，記述一件自己認(rèn)為得意的事情，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：記述事情經(jīng)過(guò)；簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為記述事情經(jīng)過(guò)．第二部分為從這件事中得到的啟示．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
be proud of為…感到自豪
be determined to 下定決心做某事
Later on后來(lái)，以后
achieve one's goal實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)
高分句型一：Amazed at how skilful they were，I was determined to be just as good．此句用了過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作原因狀語(yǔ)
高分句型二：I am really proud of this experience，which helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work．此句用which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．

解答 One Thing I'm Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player．The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis．Amazed at how skilful they were，I was determined to be just as good（高分句型一）．Later on，I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques．Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players．At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class．（記述事情經(jīng)過(guò)）
I am really proud of this experience，which helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work（高分句型二）．It also helps me better understand the proverb"Practice makes perfect．（從這件事中得到的啟示）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．