Question

假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)。你希望參加此活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)給校評(píng)選組寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信：

● 對(duì)此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)（如對(duì)本人、小學(xué)生及社會(huì)的益處等）

●個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語(yǔ)言能力等）

●你的計(jì)劃（如怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等）

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于120；

2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；

3. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：

晨曦希望小學(xué) Chenxi Hope School

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.

I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.

My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一封申請(qǐng)書(shū)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意格式，另外，要點(diǎn)不能遺漏，段落要明確，不能一段式作文。

很多地方都要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要用中文式英語(yǔ)。要恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，使文章通順，有層次感。