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16．假定你是李華，曾參加過(guò)志愿者培訓(xùn)，在培訓(xùn)中你了解到：除了要學(xué)好外語(yǔ)外，還要了解不同國(guó)家的身勢(shì)語(yǔ)，只有這樣才能更好地幫助外國(guó)朋友．你在英國(guó)的筆友John，來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)如何做一名志愿者．現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你以李華的名義寫(xiě)這封信，信要包括下面的要點(diǎn)：
1．身勢(shì)語(yǔ)的作用．
 2．對(duì)于不同的國(guó)家來(lái)說(shuō)，身勢(shì)語(yǔ)也不同．（舉一至兩個(gè)例子說(shuō)明）
3．了解不同文化身勢(shì)語(yǔ)的重要意義．
注意：1．不要逐字逐句的翻譯要點(diǎn)，可根據(jù)需要適當(dāng)增加．
     2．詞數(shù)120詞左右 （文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）
Dear John，
Glad to write to you!I once attended a training course，through which I learned that in order to be a good volunteer，I should learn about body language as well as foreign languages．Now，I'd like to share it with you．
                                                                               
So much for these，I must stop now．Looking forward to your letter．
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于英文書(shū)信，根據(jù)提示信息說(shuō)明身勢(shì)語(yǔ)的作用．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：身勢(shì)語(yǔ)的作用．對(duì)于不同的國(guó)家來(lái)說(shuō)，身勢(shì)語(yǔ)也不同．（舉一至兩個(gè)例子說(shuō)明）了解不同文化身勢(shì)語(yǔ)的重要意義．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)．Take sth for example 以…為例；open-minded思想開(kāi)放的；In general一般來(lái)說(shuō)；
When you are talking with others，you are not just using words，but also using expressions and body movements．（高分句型）
Studying it will help reduce misunderstanding between peoples and avoid the difficulties in communication．（高分句型）

解答 Dear John，
Glad to write to you!I once attended a training course，through which I learned that in order to be a good volunteer．（高分句型）I should learn about body language as well as foreign languages．Now，I'd like to share it with you．
Body language is used by people for sending messages to one another．It is very helpful because it can help make you easily understood．When you are talking with others，you are not just using words，but also using expressions and body movements．（高分句型）
As we all know，every culture has its own body language．（高分句型）Take greetings for example，the French are open-minded，so they shake hands and kiss each other on each cheek when they meet people they know．Men from Middle East often stand close to other men to talk，but they will never touch women，they just nod at women．In general，people all over the world now greet each other by shaking hands，but the Japanese prefer to bow．
Studying it will help reduce misunderstanding between peoples and avoid the difficulties in communication．（高分句型）
So much for these，I do hope you can do well as a volunteer．
Yours，
Lihua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧