假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處；每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃—橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；         
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear Jenny,
I’m so worried when I see that you’re not a little tired and nervous about the coming College Entrance Examination; Here is some advices to help you prepare the coming exam. Have enough sleep, whatever much work you have to do，or you’ll feel sleepy on an occasion in class. A balanced diet will certainly help a lot. Having more fresh fruit and vegetables every day are good for you. Which you know, a proper method of learning will enable you to learn more and faster. To get better results, that is wise to be attentive and make every effort to gain knowledge. And you were supposed to review your notes taking down after class every day. Always remember to stay happily and optimistic so that you can be energetic while doing the revision. I hope you’ll no longer feel tired and nervous.
Best wishes.


【小題1】advices→advice
【小題2】prepare后加for
【小題3】whatever→however
【小題4】刪去an
【小題5】are→is
【小題6】which→as
【小題7】that →it
【小題8】were→are
【小題9】taking→taken
【小題10】happily→happy

解析試題分析：本文寫的是因?yàn)镴enny在大學(xué)入學(xué)考試前非常緊張，作者給出的幾條建議。
【小題1】因?yàn)閍dvice 建議是不可數(shù)名詞，所以沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以去掉s.
【小題2】固定短語prepare for 為……做準(zhǔn)備，所以加for.
【小題3】固定用法：however +many + 復(fù)數(shù)名詞/however + much  + 不可數(shù)名詞+ 主語 + 謂語，無論多少…… ,所以把whatever 改成however.
【小題4】固定短語:on occasion 有時(shí)候，所以去掉an.
【小題5】因?yàn)榫渥又髡ZHaving more fresh fruit and vegetables是動(dòng)名詞做主語謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，所以are改成is。
【小題6】詞句是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句不能位于句首，所以改成as.
【小題7】本句真正主語是to be attentive and make every effort to gain knowledge，應(yīng)該由it做形式主語代替真正主語不定式短語，所以that改成it。
【小題8】此處是時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，整個(gè)短文都是現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，本句也不表過去情況，所以were改成are。
【小題9】非謂語錯(cuò)誤。notes 和take 之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系做筆記倒過來筆記被做，所以改成taken,
【小題10】副詞錯(cuò)誤。此句中stay 是系動(dòng)詞后面應(yīng)該跟形容詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)即保持快樂和樂觀，所以happily 改成happy.
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