Question

18．In your English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．
提示詞：放大鏡：magnifier．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文，讓我們就此圖寫一篇作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：描敘圖片內(nèi)容，圖片揭示的道理．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為描敘圖片內(nèi)容．第二部分為圖片揭示的道理．第三部分為最后的結(jié)論．
重點短語與句型：
stand for 代表
turn…into 把…變成
apply  to 運用；申請
高分句型一：I think what the picture shows us is that we need to magnify our weaknesses in our life此句用了what the picture shows us 引導(dǎo)主語從句，that引導(dǎo)表語從句
高分句型二：The reason why we use a magnifier is that we want to make sure how it looks like and how it is made此句the reason why…is that…中why引導(dǎo)定語從句，that引導(dǎo)表語從句

解答 In the picture，there is a guy using a magnifier to magnify a black dot on the desk．（描敘圖片內(nèi)容）
    I think what the picture shows us is that we need to magnify our weaknesses in our life．（高分句型一）Everyone has strengths and weaknesses．Overestimating the strengths make a person arrogant．What we should do is to identify our weaknesses which  the black dot stands for and to turn them into strengths．The reason why we use a magnifier is that we want to make sure how it looks like and how it is made．（高分句型二）By this way，we can use different techniques to erase the black dot and replace it by a colorful dot．（圖片揭示的道理）
    We can apply this to our real life．We use different methods to erase our weaknesses and try to replace it by strength．This is the only way for us to develop more fully and it makes our life more valuable!（最后的結(jié)論）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．