Question

10．假設(shè)你校舉辦看圖征文活動，題目為"How to protect your eyesight"．請你用英語寫一篇短文，指出圖中所反映的現(xiàn)象，并從閱讀時間，光線，眼保健操及睡眠等方面，談?wù)劚Ｗo(hù)眼睛的具體做法．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100-120字；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：近視-----near-sighted    眼保健操------eye exercise
How to protect our eyesight
                                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
As far as I am concerned①，measures should be taken②to protect our eyesight．我個人認(rèn)為，應(yīng)該采取一些措施來保護(hù)我們的視力．
①As far as I am concerned意為：我個人認(rèn)為，就我個人而言．
②由于主語measures與動詞take構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系，故用情態(tài)動詞should的被動語態(tài)形式，即should be taken．
句型二：
Thirdly，doing eye exercises ①regularly every day is a great necessity②．
第三，每天都做眼保健操是非常必要的．
①doing eye exercises 為動名詞短語作主語，表示抽象動作．
②a great necessity指一件有必要的事情，其中necessity是可數(shù)名詞．

解答 How to Protect Our Eyesight
    Now in schools，more and more students got near-sighted．As is shown in the picture，more than 80% of the students in our class wear glasses．（指出了圖中所反映的現(xiàn)象）And it's not difficult to find the causes to this phenomenon．
    Long time of studying in the classroom with no time to refresh our eyesight is one of the causes．I think poor light is also the cause because our eyes easily get tired
in the poor light．In addition，lack of sleep also contributes to this result．（分析了三個導(dǎo)致近視的原因）
    As far as I am concerned，measures should be taken to protect our eyesight．【高分句型一】Firstly，students should be given more time to do some exercise to refresh ourselves．Secondly，learning conditions need to be improved，especially the poor light in the class room．Thirdly，doing eye exercises regularly every day is a great necessity【高分句型二】．Besides，enough sleep also contributes to the improvement．（提出了四點(diǎn)保護(hù)眼睛的做法）

點(diǎn)評 本題提供的是圖畫，主要考查考生的觀察力、思考力以及表達(dá)能力；因此要求考生應(yīng)結(jié)合題目的要求，看懂了意思之后再進(jìn)行寫作；具體做法是：首先，根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容整理出幾個要點(diǎn)，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)決定要采用的語言形式，包括確定文中的人稱，時態(tài)以及選用相應(yīng)的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，并且還要寫出自己的看法．