Question

你的朋友Susan轉(zhuǎn)學了,由于性格內(nèi)向，到了新的環(huán)境遇到了一些交友的困難。作為朋友,你想給她些建議。于是你寫了一封信,鼓勵她努力適應新的環(huán)境。要點如下:
1. 要自信,自信的人交友時才有魅力；
2. 與同學交談時微笑、目視對方；
3. 主動邀請同學一起學習或者就餐時坐在一起；
4. 與同學分享自己的興趣愛好。
注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可適當增加細節(jié)。
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Dear Susan,
I ’m sorry to hear that you are not getting along well with the students in the new school.______
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Answer 1

Dear Susan, 
I ’m sorry to hear that you are not getting along well with the students in the new school. So I’d like to give you some tips. First, you should be as confident as you can. There’s nothing that attracts people more than someone who has a fairly positive attitude towards life. Next, talking to others, you can make eye contact with them. Smile at them when they look at you, and laugh when they say something that’s funny. It makes you seem friendly. Third, try to invite others to do things together. For example, you can ask them to share a table at lunch or work together while studying. It’s better to share your interest with them. I believe you will find you have a lot in common. Last but not least, don’t be too hard on yourself. Making new friends takes a lot of time and effort. You should be patient. Best wishes and good luck!
Yours, 
Lily

解析試題分析：考查應用文中的建議信的寫作。你的朋友Susan在新的環(huán)境遇到了一些交友的困難。要求給她一些建議鼓勵她努力適應新的環(huán)境。要點是提綱，具體的內(nèi)容要自己拓展，注意把握中心，圍繞中心展開論述，審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。
【亮點說明】范文里面的詞組有：getting along well with和…相處好，as confident as you can盡可能自信， make eye contact with眼神交流，have a lot in common和…有相同之處，be hard on對…苛刻，還有范文的句式變化也是一個特點： There’s nothing that attracts people more than someone who has a fairly positive attitude towards life. 這句話用了定語從句， Smile at them when they look at you, and laugh when they say something that’s funny. 這句話用定語從句， For example, you can ask them to share a table at lunch or work together while studying. It’s better to share your interest with them. 這句話用了狀語從句的省略， Making new friends takes a lot of time and effort.這句話用了動名詞做主語， 還有文章還用了 First, Next, Third, Last but not least,這樣的關聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
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