Question

4．假定你是李華，得知你的美國筆友Jack由于父母工作的需求，剛剛轉(zhuǎn)入一所新的學校，面對陌生的學習環(huán)境，他特別不適應，覺得孤獨，焦慮．請你給他寫一封郵件，表達你對此事的看法，并提出兩到三個切實可行的建議，幫助他盡早適應新環(huán)境．
注意：1）詞數(shù)100左右；2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jack，
I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school．．
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．
亮點句型一：I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school我很抱歉聽到你感到孤獨和焦慮，因為你剛剛搬到一所新學校學習．本句是個復合句，句中that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school是一個賓語從句，在賓語從句中because引導的是原因狀語從句．
亮點句型二：Then，you'd better take every chance to express yourself in class，which will help your teachers and classmates have a better understanding of you．然后，你最好在課堂上抓住每一個機會來表達自己的想法，這樣你的老師和同學會更好地理解你．本句中which引導的是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代前面整個句子的內(nèi)容．

解答 Dear Jack，
I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely and anxious because you have just moved and studied in a new school．（亮點句型一）But you needn't worry，for it is quite normal to have such a feeling in completely new surroundings．I have some suggestions for you to make things go better．
To begin with，it would be a good idea to communicate with your new teachers and classmates willingly and actively．You have to get over your shyness．Then，you'd better take every chance to express yourself in class，which will help your teachers and classmates have a better understanding of you．（亮點句型二）Besides，joining your classmates in doing after-class activities is surely helpful for you to make new friends．
I believe you will soon become adapted to everything in the new school and become happy again!
Yours，
LiHua

點評 考查開放性作文寫作，開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示．給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力．在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．