Question

4．假定你是李華，你與本班英國交換生Tom約好本周末一起進行語文訓(xùn)練，但因故無法進行．請你給他發(fā)一封電子郵件作出解釋．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)）；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Tom，
I'm sorry to inform you that the practice this weekend has to be cancelled for an emergency in my family．
This morning I received a message from my parents that my beloved grandpa had passed away．I have to leave everything at hand for his funeral and see him off for the last time，After all，I was the only child he had cherished best among all his descendants．
How I wish you understood my sadness for the loss of him and the dilemma between my feeling for him and the promise for you!But there are no other choices for me at the moment．
Time permitting，I'm bound to make up for the practice next weekend．
Wish you a happy weekend．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
（高分句型一）This morning I received a message from my parents that my beloved grandpa had passed away．
該句型使用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，指message的內(nèi)容；
（高分句型二）Time permitting，I'm bound to make up for the practice next weekend．
Time permitting該句型使用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，為獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，意思是時間容許的話；
高級詞匯：cancel取消；pass away去世；cherish珍惜；dilemma困境；be bound to注定；make up for彌補；

解答 Dear Tom，
     （開頭通知Tom取消訓(xùn)練）I'm sorry to inform you that the practice this weekend has to be cancelled for an emergency in my family．
     （高分句型一）This morning I received a message from my parents that my beloved grandpa had passed away．I have to leave everything at hand for his funeral and see him off for the last time，After all，I was the only child he had cherished best among all his descendants．
     How I wish you understood my sadness for the loss of him and the dilemma between my feeling for him and the promise for you!But there are no other choices for me at the moment．
   （高分句型二）Time permitting，I'm bound to make up for the practice next weekend．
   Wish you a happy weekend．
      
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．