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15．我們能活在這美好、精彩的世界上，是因為有父母，老師，朋友．因此在每個人的生命之中應(yīng)懷有一顆感恩之心，學(xué)會感恩他人． 請從以下幾點展開寫一篇題目為Learn to Be Grateful 的文章．
1．感恩父母，因為父母給了我們?nèi)�部的愛�?br />2．感恩老師，因為老師傳授了我們知識；
3．感恩朋友，因為朋友給我們帶來歡樂；
4．你認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該為他們做些什么．
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Learn to Be Grateful
Whenever and wherever we are，we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world．

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分析 這是一篇議論文，從對父母老師朋友三個方面的感激展開．考生在寫作時要注意思路清晰及條理清楚．題目已給定大致的觀點，要注意漢譯英的正確性以及不要遺漏觀點，特別注意不要逐條翻譯．文章開篇一句Whenever and wherever we are，we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world．開篇即用了whenever wherever引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，讓人眼前一亮，考生扎實的語言功底可見一斑．be grateful to對…感激．第二段第一句First of all，I would like to express my thanks to my parents who give endless love to me．express my thanks 表達(dá)我的感激之情；who give their endless love to me，定語從句修飾parents，再次展現(xiàn)了句式調(diào)用能力．express，endless，都屬于高級詞匯．第段第二句As we know，parents do all they can to make their children's life better and better，do all one can固定句式，此處應(yīng)用準(zhǔn)確，恰當(dāng)；better and better，越來越好；整個句子緊湊凝練．第二段第四句，why I admire them is that they teach us  not only knowledge but also skills．處處是經(jīng)典，首先why引導(dǎo)的主語從句為亮點，此外，that 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句加上not only，but also準(zhǔn)確地把對老師的感謝分為兩個層次，知識和技能；層次清晰．第二段第五句，share happiness and sorrow with me，與我分享快樂與悲傷，從固定搭配運用，到精準(zhǔn)地描述朋友的特點都是非常精妙，學(xué)會多用．第二段最后一句，Because of you．my life is filled with laughter and sunshine．這樣的句子，已經(jīng)接近詩意般的美感了．第三段第一句，They are so important  in my life that we should learn to be grateful to them點名文章主旨．最后一句，we should work hard and live happily，which is a good pay for them，洋溢著正能量．總結(jié)：基本格式為first of all，secondly，finally．

解答 Learn to Be Grateful
Whenever and wherever we are，we should learn to be grateful to the people around us in this beautiful and wonderful world．
First of all，I would like to express thanks to my parents who give their endless love to me．（高分句型）As we know，parents do all they can to make their children's life better and better．（高分句型） Secondly，I am grateful to my teachers for their selfless work．Why I admire them is that they teach us not only knowledge but also all kinds of important skills．（高分句型） Finally，I want to thank my fellow friends who share happiness and sorrow with me．Because of you，my life is filled with laughter and sunshine．
They are so important in my life that we should learn to be grateful to them．（高分句型）Try to remember to give our sincere wishes to them now and then．Above all，we should try to work hard and live happily，which is a god pay for them．（高分句型）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．