Question

19．假定你是李華，你的美國朋友sarah 打算暑期來北京旅游，來信詢問改建后前門大街的情況．請你寫封回信，簡單介紹以下內(nèi)容：
1簡況：長800余米、600多年歷史、300余家商鋪；
2位置：天安門廣場南面；
3交通：公共汽車17、69、59等路，地鐵2號線；
4特色：步行街、當(dāng)當(dāng)車、茶館、劇院等．
參考詞匯：步行街 pedestrian street
當(dāng)當(dāng)車 trolley car
地鐵 subway
注意：
1詞數(shù)100左右；
2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3開頭語已為你寫好，請將完整的回信書寫在答題卡上．

Dear sarah．
Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street．Here is something about it．Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old．Along this 800-meter street，there are more than
300 shops．As the street is in the center of Beijing，just to the south of Tian'anmen Square，it's very convenient
to get there by bus．You may take Buses No.17，69 or 59．Subway Line 2 has a stop there too．Qianmen Street
is a pedestrian street，but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops，but also to theatres and
teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life．
I'm sure you'll like it．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇說明性的文章．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱展開敘述，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容包括：一點題；二簡況；位置；交通；特色；三結(jié)束語．
高分句型：
1．As the street is in the center of Beijing，just to the south of Tian'anmen Square，it's very convenient to get there by bus．
句子里As引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示"因為"；it's  convenient to do sth表示"做某事方便"．
因為這條街道在北京市中心，就在天安門的南面，所以做公共汽車去那里很方便．
2．Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops，but also to theatres and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life．
句子里not only…but also 表示"不但…而且"；where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life是先行詞theatres and teahouses 的定語從句．
前門大街是步行街，但是有軌電車不但可以帶你到商店，而且可以去戲園子和茶館，在這里你可以體驗真正的中國人的生活．

解答 Dear Sarah，
     Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Oianmen Street．Here is something about it．（點題）
     Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old．Along this 800-meter street，there are more than 300 shops．（簡況） As the street is in the center of Beijing，just to the south of Tian'anmen Square，it's very convenient to get there by bus．【高分句型一】（位置） You may take Buses No.17，69 or 59．Subway Line 2 has a stop there too．（交通） Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops，but also to theatres and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life．【高分句型二】（特色）
     I'm sure you'll like it．（結(jié)束語）
                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

點評 這是提綱類作文．書面表達(dá)試題一般都由"情景"和"要求"兩部分構(gòu)成．"情景"中包括所寫材料的目的、對象、時間、地點、內(nèi)容等，一般在書面表達(dá)題的前半部分；而"要求"一般在書面表達(dá)的后半部分，以"注意"形式給出，實際上是對考生提出的要求．因而考生對于題目所提供的說明，應(yīng)認(rèn)真分析、反復(fù)推敲，搞清提出的內(nèi)容要求，抓住所要表達(dá)的信息點．