Question

20．最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明，大約有30%的高中生養(yǎng)成不吃早餐的習(xí)慣．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇題為"Top Meal of the Day"的短文刊登在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)輔導(dǎo)報(bào)上．

原因：	1．晚上學(xué)習(xí)太晚，不吃早餐可多睡一會(huì)兒；
	2．家長(zhǎng)太忙無(wú)暇顧及，給錢(qián)讓孩子自己解決；
	3．一些女孩子為保持苗條身材而一些男生則為了減肥不吃早餐．
結(jié)果：	1．整天昏昏欲睡，記憶力下降；
	2．上課注意力不能集中；
	3．考試成績(jī)不理想．
建議：	1．早餐不可少，它提供全天所需能量的30%，且有助于創(chuàng)造能力的培養(yǎng)； 2．青少年健康應(yīng)從早餐抓起． 3．自己的建議（至少2點(diǎn)）

注意：1．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯；可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫．
2．詞數(shù)：120左右；文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)．
3．參考詞匯：創(chuàng)造能力 creative abilities
A recent study shows that nearly 30 percent of the high school students do not have breakfast．                                                                       

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
What's worse，it is impossible for them to concentrate on their studies and to get high marks in all kinds of tests．
高分句型二：
Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．
句型一 it is impossible for them to concentrate on their studies and to get high  該句中有一個(gè)重要的固定句型：it is+adj+for sb+to do sth 對(duì)于某人而言做．．是．．的
句型二  who study late into the night choose to…該句是一個(gè)who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，who在從句中做主語(yǔ)，替代先行詞students
此外，該書(shū)面表達(dá)中還包含有以下重要短語(yǔ)和高級(jí)詞匯：what's more 而且   concentrate on  集中精神力于．．    to  one's surprise   讓某人感到驚訝的是    lose weitht   減肥
該書(shū)面表達(dá)中的重要句型部分的從句的使用和高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和詞匯的使用，使得文章更層次分明，表述更加確切完整．

解答 A recent study shows that nearly 30 percent of the high school students do not have breakfast．As a result，they tend to feel sleepy all day and have poor memories．What's worse，it is impossible for them to concentrate on their studies and to get high marks in all kinds of tests．（高分句型一）（結(jié)果）
   Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed．（高分句型二）Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them．To our surprise，in order to stay slim and lose weight，a few school girls and boys often go to school without breakfast．（原因）
   In fact，the morning meal plays an important part．It can provide 30 percent of the whole day's energy．For creative abilities and better judgment，school should start their days with a regular breakfast．（建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書(shū)面表達(dá)為圖表類，通常都有一定的數(shù)據(jù)或者表格內(nèi)容作為寫(xiě)作參考和依據(jù)．考生應(yīng)細(xì)致觀察圖表內(nèi)容，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)單明了的語(yǔ)言將圖表內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚．另外，平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)短語(yǔ)和詞匯，以使得行文有更多的亮點(diǎn)．