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2．假設(shè)你叫李華，你的美國好友James打算來福建旅游，發(fā)來郵件向你詢問武夷山的情況．請你根據(jù)以下提示給他回一封電子郵件．
要點：（1）位于福建省西北部．（2）風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，氣候宜人．（3）眾多著名景點和奇特的中式建筑．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右．（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear James，
I'm glad to hear that you are visiting FuJian for your winter holiday．I am writing to tell you more about Wu Yi Mountain．Located in the northwest of FuJian Province，it is a wonderful tourist attraction．（高分句型一）The weather there is mild in summer．What is more important is that it is most famous as a holy tourist site．（高分句型二）Not only can you appreciate the impressive scenery，but you can also learn more about the culture of it．（高分句型三）Wu Yi Mountain，which is famous for many places of interests，has a good number of fantastic Chinese buildings．（高分句型四）
There is no doubt that a trip to Wu Yi Mountain will be a truly unforgetable experience．（高分句型五）I wish you a nice trip!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給美國好友James回一封電子郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：（1）位于福建省西北部．（2）風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，氣候宜人．（3）眾多著名景點和奇特的中式建筑． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：tourist attraction旅游勝地；not only，but also，不僅，而且；be famous for因為…而出名
Located in the northwest of FuJian Province，it is a wonderful tourist attraction．（高分句型一）
What is more important is that it is most famous as a holy tourist site．（高分句型二）
Not only can you appreciate the impressive scenery，but you can also learn more about the culture of it．（高分句型三）
Wu Yi Mountain，which is famous for many places of interests，has a good number of fantastic Chinese buildings．（高分句型四）
 There is no doubt that a trip to Wu Yi Mountain will be a truly unforgetable experience．（高分句型五）

解答 Dear James，
     I'm glad to hear that you are visiting FuJian for your holiday．I am writing to tell you more about Wu Yi Mountain．
     Located in the northwest of FuJian Province，it is a wonderful tourist attraction．（高分句型一）The weather there is mild in summer．What is more important is that it is most famous as a holy tourist site．（高分句型二）Not only can you appreciate the impressive scenery，but you can also learn more about the culture of it．（高分句型三）Wu Yi Mountain，which is famous for many places of interests，has a good number of fantastic Chinese buildings．（高分句型四）
     There is no doubt that a trip to Wu Yi Mountain will be a truly unforgetable experience．（高分句型五）I wish you a nice trip!
                                                                                                                                                                                Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．