【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

Life is full of various experiences, some of them are unforgettable. I still remember the hiking experiences with my classmates for 16 km a year ago. That summer day, we set off early in the morning, think it would be a great fun to walk for so long a distance. However, as the weather is getting hotter and hotter, I found their legs heavier and heavier. What’s worse, my feet began bleeding because long time pressing against the shoes. At one point, I even wanted to give up. But I managed to dragging the rest of the way to the destination. Though not pleasant, this journey was impressive or rewarding, I have learnt that life is a long journey like this. No matter what happened, we should never give up.

【答案】1. them改成which

2. experiences改成experience

3. think改成thinking

4. 去掉great前面的a

5. is改成was

6. their改成my

7. because后加of

8.dragging改成drag

9. or 改成and

10. happened改成happens

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。作者敘述了一年前和同學(xué)們徒步旅行16公里的經(jīng)歷。剛開始時(shí)，覺得很有趣，但是天氣炎熱以及作者的腳開始流血使作者一度想放棄，最后作者還是堅(jiān)持走完了全程，作者覺得無論發(fā)生什么事，都不應(yīng)該放棄。

第一處：考查關(guān)系代詞。句意：生活充滿了各種各樣的經(jīng)歷，有些是難忘的。分析句子可知， experiences為先行詞，在后面的非限制性定語從句中作of的賓語。故 them改成which 。

第二處：考查名詞。句意：我仍然記得一年前和同學(xué)們徒步旅行16公里的經(jīng)歷。本句特指的是徒步經(jīng)歷，所以應(yīng)用experience的單數(shù)形式，而不是復(fù)數(shù)形式。故experiences改成experience。

第三處：考查現(xiàn)在分詞。句意：那年夏天，我們一大早就出發(fā)了，覺得走這么遠(yuǎn)的路會(huì)很有趣。分析句子可知，we與think在邏輯上是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。故 think改成thinking。

第四處：考查不可數(shù)名詞。句意：那年夏天，我們一大早就出發(fā)了，覺得走這么遠(yuǎn)的路會(huì)很有趣。fun為不可數(shù)名詞。其前不能用不定冠詞。故去掉great前面的a。

第五處：考查一般過去時(shí)。句意：。然而，隨著天氣越來越熱，我發(fā)現(xiàn)我們的腿越來越重。由“a year ago”可知，本句為一般過去時(shí)。所以be動(dòng)詞為was。故is改成was。

第六處：考查代詞。句意：然而，隨著天氣越來越熱，我發(fā)現(xiàn)我的腿越來越重。分析句意可知，作者發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的腿越來越重。所以應(yīng)用形容詞性物主代詞my修飾legs。故 their改成my。

第七處：考查介詞。句意：更糟的是，我的腳因?yàn)殚L(zhǎng)時(shí)間被鞋子擠壓而開始流血。because of后接名詞/代詞/動(dòng)名詞，而because引導(dǎo)句子。故 because后加of。

第八處：考查動(dòng)詞不定式。句意：雖然我的步伐緩慢而吃力，但卻成功地到達(dá)了終點(diǎn)。manage to do sth“設(shè)法做某事（強(qiáng)調(diào)成功）”。故dragging改成drag。

第九處：考查連詞。句意：雖然這次旅行不令人愉快，但這段旅行給我留下了深刻的印象，也讓我收獲頗豐。分析句子可知，前后兩個(gè)形容詞為并列關(guān)系。故or 改成and 。

第十處：考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。句意：無論發(fā)生什么事，我們都不應(yīng)該放棄。 分析句子可知，本句為 No matter what 引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語為 No matter what ，所以謂語為第三人稱單數(shù)形式。故happened改成happens。

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