Question

假如你班要以“如何為高考做準(zhǔn)備”開一個(gè)班會(huì)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)高考備考過(guò)程中要注意的事項(xiàng)及建議理由：
保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣；
目標(biāo)明確、正確評(píng)價(jià)自己。太低的目標(biāo)使人松懈，太高的目標(biāo)使人喪失信心；
與父母、老師或同學(xué)溝通幫忙走出困境；
作息合理，飲食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3. 參考詞匯：明確的（definite）評(píng)價(jià)（estimation）。

Answer 1

No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.
First, it’s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. Besides, we’d better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we are in trouble. Finally, striking a proper balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.
With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination. 這句話用了no doubt難怪，Yet what should we do in order to achieve success?這句話是不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)， it’s very important to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us to relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. 這句話用it形式主語(yǔ)，not only…but also結(jié)構(gòu)， Only in this way will we not be easily pleased or disappointed with what we have known and done. 這句話用倒裝句和賓語(yǔ)從句，we’d better sometimes talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we are in trouble. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance. 這句話用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，還有文章還使用了First, Meanwhile,Besides, Finally,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類寫作