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3．共享單車（sharing bikes）的出現(xiàn)，為大家?guī)�來了方便．同時(shí)，也反映出一些問題．例如，隨意停放，影響行人通行；故意破壞車輛，造成維護(hù)成本增加，并影響他人正常使用，等等．請針對此現(xiàn)象，寫一封倡議書，號召大家文明用車．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1、共享單車的好處；
2、使用過程中出規(guī)的問題；
3、如何做到文明用車．
寫作要求：
1、文章要涵蓋上述要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．
2、字?jǐn)?shù)：不少于100字．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息共享單車（sharing bikes）的出現(xiàn)，為大家?guī)�來了方便．同時(shí)，也反映出一些問題．例如，隨意停放，影響行人通行；故意破壞車輛，造成維護(hù)成本增加，并影響他人正常使用，等等．請針對此現(xiàn)象，寫一封倡議書，號召大家文明用車，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：共享單車的好處；使用過程中出規(guī)的問題；如何做到文明用車． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Presently目前；A large number of許多，大量；Moreover而且；However然而；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Lastly最后；To conclude總之；
A large number of sharing bikes can be found and rented at a low price．（高分句型一）
However，along with its rapid development，sharingbikes also bring some problems，including random parking，vandalism and possession of sharing bikes，etc．（高分句型二）
With effective and efficient measures taken，and efforts made by those involved，it can be expected that sharing bikes will play a contributive and constructive role in urban public transportation．（高分句型三）

解答 My Views on Sharing bikes 　　     Presently，in big cities like Shanghai and Guangzhou，sharing bikes have become increasingly popular．A large number of sharing bikes can be found and rented at a low price．（高分句型一）Moreover，you can park the bike almost anywhere you like．Urban transportation has thus been made much more convenient and even revolutionized．However，along with its rapid development，sharing bikes also bring some problems，including random parking，vandalism and possession of sharing bikes，etc．（高分句型二）To solve these problems，there are some measures for the authorities to take．Firstly，the government could implement more strict laws and rules to regulate the operation and management of sharing bikes．Secondly，the public should raise their awareness of using sharing bikes reasonably．Lastly，urban transportation system should be upgraded and improved to accommodate automobiles，bikes and pedestrians．
         To conclude，a sensible attitude should be held toward sharing bikes．With effective and efficient measures taken，and efforts made by those involved，it can be expected that sharing bikes will play a contributive and constructive role in urban public transportation．（高分句型三）

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