Question

假定你是李華，《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》（China Daily）計(jì)劃面向中學(xué)生舉辦環(huán)境保護(hù)知識(shí)競(jìng)賽（Environment - protecting Knowledge Contest），請(qǐng)你作為該報(bào)的一名特約通訊員，代表學(xué)生會(huì)對(duì)所在學(xué)校的學(xué)生寫(xiě)一則海報(bào)。
內(nèi)容主要包括：
1．舉辦目的（重視環(huán)境作用，提高環(huán)境保護(hù)意識(shí)）
2．舉辦時(shí)間（10月14日—31日）
3．參與方法：在報(bào)紙上答題；裁下答案，在截止日期前郵寄至《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》。
4．希望同學(xué)們平時(shí)留意環(huán)保方面的知識(shí)并踴躍參加。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．海報(bào)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好。
Dear schoolmates,
We all agree that we are closely connected with the environments, but how well do we know?
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Students’ Union

Answer 1

Dear schoolmates,
We all agree that we are closely connected with the environments, but how well do we know?
I order to get us high school students to attach importance to the environments and improve our environment-protecting awareness, China Daily is planning to hold an Environment-protecting Knowledge Contest.
The contest will start on October 14th and end on 31st. Remember, you can take the contest on China Daily newspaper, which is very familiar and popular among high school students. Your answers should be cut down from the newspaper and sent to China Daily before the deadline.
I hope that all of our schoolmates can pay attention to relative information about the environments in our daily life to prepare for the contest and take an active party in it in time.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這是提綱式作文，要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，而且很詳細(xì)，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，但是不缺乏高級(jí)詞匯和句型：be connected with和…有聯(lián)系， attach importance to重視，cut down剪下， Remember, you can take the contest on China Daily newspaper, which is very familiar and popular among high school students. 這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， I hope that all of our schoolmates can pay attention to relative information about the environments in our daily life to prepare for the contest and take an active party in it in time.這句話用了不定式做狀語(yǔ)。