分析 這是提綱類(lèi)作文.根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng),時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主,包括要點(diǎn):一點(diǎn)題;二感興趣的課程;三期望從這門(mén)課程中學(xué)到什么;四為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容.
高分句型:
1.I'd like to register to attend a course about gardening because(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句) I have liked flowers and grasses since ( since 引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)I was a child
我想要報(bào)名參加園藝課程,因?yàn)閺倪是孩子的時(shí)候我就喜歡花草.
2.For another(和For one thing并列),after graduation from college,I will devote my life to(devote…to表示"奉獻(xiàn)于") cultivating flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state,which (which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句,代指a more beautiful state )will attract more foreigners to visit
另外,大學(xué)畢業(yè)以后,我會(huì)全身心的種植花草來(lái)讓我們的國(guó)家更美麗,吸引更多的外國(guó)人參觀(guān).
解答 Dear leader,
I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses,such as gardening,cooking,self-defence,nursing and so on.(點(diǎn)題)
I'd like to register to attend a course about gardening because I have liked flowers and grasses since I was a child.【高分句型一】I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature.(感興趣的課程以及原因)
For one thing,I hope to gain more knowledge of gardening,which can help me to major in the gardening after attending college.Besides,I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure plants more,and also,I wish to get more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter university.(期望從這門(mén)課程中學(xué)到什么)For another,after graduation from college,I will devote my life to cultivating flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state,which will attract more foreigners to visit.【高分句型二】(為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容)
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Wang hua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作.提綱類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括,不能有遺漏和省略.同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序,運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文,同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采.
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