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南陽(yáng)一中將于2013年10月28日舉行建校110周年校慶活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，現(xiàn)將代表全體學(xué)生邀請(qǐng)學(xué)校優(yōu)秀畢業(yè)生陳明（現(xiàn)于清華大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)）回校參加校慶典禮活動(dòng)。請(qǐng) 根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封e-mail 向陳明發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。
要點(diǎn)： 1. 10月28日上午9點(diǎn)，舉行“慶祝南陽(yáng)一中建校110年周年慶典”，地點(diǎn)南陽(yáng)一中操場(chǎng)。2.下午3點(diǎn)在報(bào)告廳給學(xué)生做報(bào)告，內(nèi)容關(guān)于介紹大學(xué)生活及給予他們學(xué)習(xí)生活方面的建議。3. 10月23日前回復(fù)是否可以前來(lái)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120個(gè)左右。  2. 信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示詞：110周年慶典：the 110^th anniversary celebration
Dear Chen Ming,
How is everything with you? ___________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Chen Ming,
How is everything with you? Our school is going to hold her 110th anniversary celebration on October 28,2013.I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union.Now on behalf of all students, I’m writing to invite you to come back to attend the ceremony.
Now let me introduce the related activities for you. The ceremony are all the teachers and students together with some outstanding graduates at home and abroad.  What’s more, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver a lecture hall at 3:00 pm.It would be better if you could introduce the college life and offer some advice on our life and study. We’d be very grateful if you could let me know whether to participate by October 23.
We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本文是一封邀請(qǐng)信。要求代表全體學(xué)生邀請(qǐng)學(xué)校優(yōu)秀畢業(yè)生陳明（現(xiàn)于清華大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)）回校參加校慶典禮活動(dòng)。請(qǐng) 根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封e-mail 向陳明發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。文章具有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，內(nèi)容貼近考生的實(shí)際情況，考生有話(huà)可說(shuō)，有話(huà)可寫(xiě)。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，但只是一個(gè)提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中要注意使用合適的連接詞，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)的句型如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。本更有文采。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：for one thing，What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】Now on behalf of all students, I’m writing to invite you to come back to attend the ceremony.這句話(huà)用了on behalf of代表， Now let me introduce the related activities for you. 這句話(huà)用了過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)， I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver a lecture hall at 3:00 pm.這句話(huà)用了賓語(yǔ)從句和it做形式主語(yǔ)， We’d be very grateful if you could let me know whether to participate by October 23.這句話(huà)用了疑問(wèn)詞+to do做賓語(yǔ)，還有文章還用了What’s more,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。
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