Question

11．Suppose you are Li Hua．Your friend Mike wrote you a letter，complaining about his conflicts with his parents．Mike's parents stress the merits（價(jià)值，優(yōu)點(diǎn)） of"Chinese parenting"，which means high expectations，strict discipline （such as no TV or computer games），and punishment instead of encouragement．They believe such strict parenting is good for the growth of children，but Mike thinks otherwise．Which view do you agree with？Write him a letter and your letter should include：
1．Your opinion and the reasons in support of it．
2．Some advice on Mike's conflicts with his parents．
詞數(shù)：100詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文描述了Mike父母對(duì)于孩子過嚴(yán)的要求和過高的期望期望，考生要圍繞這一話題來寫作．提出自己的看法，父母這樣做是好是壞以及給Mike的建議．同時(shí)考生還要注意的是在寫作過程中所運(yùn)用的時(shí)態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，除此以外，寫作過程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語和句型．最后注意以書信形式寫作．
重要短語：
  have high expectations on，對(duì)…有很高期待，be willing to do，樂意做，have negative effect on 對(duì)…有消極影響．
高分句子：
1．Facing fierce competition in the future，no wonder our parents are very much concerned about us．本句前半句為現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，后半句no wonder 加句子，意為難怪…
2．We will feel hard to breathe and are easy to be frustrated when we feel that we are unable to meet their requirements．本句中含有when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，且從句中又包含that 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．

解答 Dear Mike：
     I am so sorry to hear that you have conflicts with your parents．
     However，there are too many parents who have high expectations on their kids and are willing to do everything possible as long as their kids have bright future like your parents．（描述情況）Facing fierce competition in the future，no wonder our parents are very much concerned about us．（高分句型）They lay great hope on us and want us to be strong enough to face vavious challenges．We fully understand and respect their feelings．However，if the expectations are high beyond our ability，it is a kind of heavy pressure on us．We will feel hard to breathe and are easy to be frustrated when we feel that we are unable to meet their requirements．（高分句型）As a result，it will have negative effect on our study and life．（提出觀點(diǎn)）
     In my opinion，you ought to say to your parents that you are sure to do your utmost and not to let them down through hard working，please don't give you too much pressure and make you relaxed．Tell that you need them encouragement constantly so that you will have more confidence to do things better．（提出建議）
                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在完成半開放作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體．