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5．假定你是中學(xué)生李華，最近從莆田新聞網(wǎng)上得知第25屆世界技能錦標(biāo)賽（the 25^th World Skills Championship）將在莆田舉行．請你用英文寫封電子郵件向組委會申請加入志愿者隊伍，內(nèi)容主要包括：
1．身體狀況（年齡、身高…）；
2．興趣愛好（攝影、踢足球…）；
3．英文程度；
4．目的和意義．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．結(jié)語已為你寫好．
Dear Sir，
My name is Li Hua，aged 17，of medium size．I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer for the 25th World Skills Championship，which will be held in Putian in March．（高分句型一）My advantages for the role are as follows．
First，I'm good at spoken English，so that I can communicate with foreigners fluently．Second，I'm interested in taking photos，which will serve people well during this period．（高分句型二）Third，playing football not only builds me up，but also develops my team spirit．Last but not least，I'm sure this activity will benefit me a lot．I'd be very grateful if you let me have information about my becoming a member of the volunteers．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息最近從莆田新聞網(wǎng)上得知第25屆世界技能錦標(biāo)賽（the 25^th World Skills Championship）將在莆田舉行．請你用英文寫封電子郵件向組委會申請加入志愿者隊伍，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：身體狀況（年齡、身高…）；興趣愛好（攝影、踢足球…）；英文程度；目的和意義． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：apply for申請； First首先；Second其次；Third第三；Last but not least最后同樣最重要的是；communicate with與…交流；not only，but also不僅，而且；be good at擅長；hear from收到…的來信；
I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer for the 25th World Skills Championship，which will be held in Putian in March．（高分句型一）
Second，I'm interested in taking photos，which will serve people well during this period．（高分句型二）
I'd be very grateful if you let me have information about my becoming a member of the volunteers．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir，
      My name is Li Hua，aged 17，of medium size．I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer for the 25th World Skills Championship，which will be held in Putian in March．（高分句型一）My advantages for the role are as follows．
      First，I'm good at spoken English，so that I can communicate with foreigners fluently．Second，I'm interested in taking photos，which will serve people well during this period．（高分句型二）Third，playing football not only builds me up，but also develops my team spirit．Last but not least，I'm sure this activity will benefit me a lot．I'd be very grateful if you let me have information about my becoming a member of the volunteers．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to hearing from you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．