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5．假定你是中學(xué)生李華，最近從莆田新聞網(wǎng)上得知第25屆世界技能錦標(biāo)賽（the 25^th World Skills Championship）將在莆田舉行．請(qǐng)你用英文寫封電子郵件向組委會(huì)申請(qǐng)加入志愿者隊(duì)伍，內(nèi)容主要包括：
1．身體狀況（年齡、身高…）；
2．興趣愛(ài)好（攝影、踢足球…）；
3．英文程度；
4．目的和意義．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．結(jié)語(yǔ)已為你寫好．
Dear Sir，
My name is Li Hua，aged 17，of medium size．I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer for the 25th World Skills Championship，which will be held in Putian in March．（高分句型一）My advantages for the role are as follows．
First，I'm good at spoken English，so that I can communicate with foreigners fluently．Second，I'm interested in taking photos，which will serve people well during this period．（高分句型二）Third，playing football not only builds me up，but also develops my team spirit．Last but not least，I'm sure this activity will benefit me a lot．I'd be very grateful if you let me have information about my becoming a member of the volunteers．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息最近從莆田新聞網(wǎng)上得知第25屆世界技能錦標(biāo)賽（the 25^th World Skills Championship）將在莆田舉行．請(qǐng)你用英文寫封電子郵件向組委會(huì)申請(qǐng)加入志愿者隊(duì)伍，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：身體狀況（年齡、身高…）；興趣愛(ài)好（攝影、踢足球…）；英文程度；目的和意義． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：apply for申請(qǐng)； First首先；Second其次；Third第三；Last but not least最后同樣最重要的是；communicate with與…交流；not only，but also不僅，而且；be good at擅長(zhǎng)；hear from收到…的來(lái)信；
I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer for the 25th World Skills Championship，which will be held in Putian in March．（高分句型一）
Second，I'm interested in taking photos，which will serve people well during this period．（高分句型二）
I'd be very grateful if you let me have information about my becoming a member of the volunteers．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir，
      My name is Li Hua，aged 17，of medium size．I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer for the 25th World Skills Championship，which will be held in Putian in March．（高分句型一）My advantages for the role are as follows．
      First，I'm good at spoken English，so that I can communicate with foreigners fluently．Second，I'm interested in taking photos，which will serve people well during this period．（高分句型二）Third，playing football not only builds me up，but also develops my team spirit．Last but not least，I'm sure this activity will benefit me a lot．I'd be very grateful if you let me have information about my becoming a member of the volunteers．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to hearing from you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．