Question

19．假如你是李華，你家樓下住著一位新搬來的英國人James，他在你家信箱里留了一封信，抱怨你們家維修廚房時(shí)候產(chǎn)生的噪音，請(qǐng)給她寫一封回信，內(nèi)容主要包括：
    1．表達(dá)歉意
    2．解釋原因
•父母白天上班，只能晚上維修，
•不專業(yè)，耗時(shí)長…
    3．說明措施，請(qǐng)工人周末白天維修注意：
  1．詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；  3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)． 
Dear James，
    We were very shocked to get your letter complaining about the noise from our flat．
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Sorry to have caused these problems．
                                                          Yours faithfully，
                                                                                   Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是寫一封信，關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，本文的主題是回復(fù)關(guān)于樓下鄰居抱怨你們家維修廚房時(shí)候產(chǎn)生的噪音的事，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系．靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)．語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】學(xué)生寫作要有靈活性，同時(shí)要表現(xiàn)出較好的英語語言表達(dá)能力．文章使用了很好的短語和句子：accept our apologies接受道歉，are busy at忙于…，have to不得不，What's more還有，have difficulty in做..有困難，As a consequence結(jié)果，a lot of大量，call in請(qǐng)來，叫來．we didn't expect it spoiled your evenings and caused you some distress．是并列句，they are not so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly．是結(jié)果狀語從句，We promise that he'll work only during daytime hours，so you won't be disturbed in the evenings again．是結(jié)果狀語從句  As a consequence，it is taking longer than expected and has resulted in a lot of banging and hammering．句子出彩，為文章加分．

解答 Dear James，
      We were very shocked to get your letter complaining about the noise from our flat．we didn't expect it spoiled your evenings and caused you some distress．We do hope you accept our apologies．（表達(dá)歉意）
       As my parents are busy at work during daytime，they have to refit our kitchen in the evenings．（高分句型一）What's more，they are not so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly．（高分句型二）As a consequence，it is taking longer than expected and has resulted in a lot of banging and hammering．（解釋原因）
       As the repair is still not finished，we will call in a professional worker to finish the work this weekend．（高分句型三）We promise that he'll work only during daytime hours，so you won't be disturbed in the evenings again．（說明措施）
        Sorry to have caused these problems．
                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．