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2.隨著因特網的發(fā)展,網上購物(Online Shopping)已經成為一種時尚.請根據下表內容,用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文,描述網上購物的利與弊,并發(fā)表你個人的觀點.
                                 網上購物
網購的優(yōu)點l  提供方便的服務;
l  購買的商品價格低廉;
l  節(jié)省時間.
網購的弊端l  商品質量無保證;
l  退還商品不方便;
l  長時間上網對身體有害.
你的觀點(至少兩點)1….;  2….
注意:開頭部分已經給出,不計入總詞數.
With the development of technology,online shopping is becoming increasingly popular these days and has become a symbol of fashion.
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分析 隨著因特網的發(fā)展,網上購物(Online Shopping)已經成為一種時尚.請根據下表內容,用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文,描述網上購物的利與弊,并發(fā)表你個人的觀點.這是一篇明顯的圖表作文,就是把文章的情景和內容要求分成塊,以表格的形式列出以進行寫作.考生在審題的時候應該注意審要求、審文體、審人稱、審時態(tài).題文已經告知要求,那么文體應為應用文體,即介紹網購的優(yōu)缺點和自己的看法;時態(tài)主要用一般現在時即可.考生在寫作時應該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型,將要點逐條表達出來.表達時應該綜合運用所掌握的知識,避開生僻的詞匯,并克服母語的干擾,按照英語的習慣方式,用地道的英語表達出來,力求做到語言準確無誤.然后根據要點選詞組句,然后按照篇章結構連句成篇.
【亮點說明】本文語言凝練,論點鮮明,條理層次清晰.文章第二段網購的優(yōu)點;文章第三段網購的缺點;第四段自己的看法.文章使用了that引導的主語從句that online shopping has many advantages over traditional shopping(網上購物有優(yōu)于傳統(tǒng)購物的許多優(yōu)點)和定語從句that modern technology brings them(現代科技帶給他們的);only+狀語放在句首的倒裝句Only in this way can people protect themselves while enjoying the convenience from the Internet(僅僅是這種方法人們才能在享受因特網帶來的方便的時候保護他們自己).高級短語和結構:First of all首先;What's worse更糟糕的是;On one hand一方面;on the other hand在另一方面.最后一句使用Only in this way can people protect themselves while enjoying the convenience from the Internet僅僅是這種方法人們才能在享受因特網帶來的方便的時候保護他們自己,即闡明了自己的觀點還給文章一個完美的結束.

解答 With the development of technology,online shopping is becoming increasingly popular these days and has become a symbol of fashion.
    It's quite obvious that online shopping has many advantages over traditional shopping.(高分句型一)First of all,people shopping online can enjoy the great convenience that modern technology brings them.In addition,the products online tend to be cheaper than those in traditional stores.What's more,by shopping online,people can save much time,no longer bothering to go to a shopping center.
    However,we can't turn a blind eye to the problems with online shopping.On one hand,the quality of the products,in many cases,seems not as superior as it is promised.On the other hand,it is often inconvenient to change products found unsatisfied.(高分句型二)
    From my point of view,online shopping should only be used when needed.That's to say,you may buy things you can't find in local markets.Besides,people should never rely too much on the Internet.Regular ways of shopping should never be abandoned.Only in this way can people protect themselves while enjoying the convenience from the Internet.(高分句型三)

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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