網(wǎng)上購物 | |
網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn) | l 提供方便的服務(wù); l 購買的商品價(jià)格低廉; l 節(jié)省時(shí)間. |
網(wǎng)購的弊端 | l 商品質(zhì)量無保證; l 退還商品不方便; l 長時(shí)間上網(wǎng)對身體有害. |
你的觀點(diǎn)(至少兩點(diǎn)) | 1….; 2…. |
分析 隨著因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展,網(wǎng)上購物(Online Shopping)已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚.請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文,描述網(wǎng)上購物的利與弊,并發(fā)表你個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn).這是一篇明顯的圖表作文,就是把文章的情景和內(nèi)容要求分成塊,以表格的形式列出以進(jìn)行寫作.考生在審題的時(shí)候應(yīng)該注意審要求、審文體、審人稱、審時(shí)態(tài).題文已經(jīng)告知要求,那么文體應(yīng)為應(yīng)用文體,即介紹網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)和自己的看法;時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可.考生在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型,將要點(diǎn)逐條表達(dá)出來.表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)該綜合運(yùn)用所掌握的知識(shí),避開生僻的詞匯,并克服母語的干擾,按照英語的習(xí)慣方式,用地道的英語表達(dá)出來,力求做到語言準(zhǔn)確無誤.然后根據(jù)要點(diǎn)選詞組句,然后按照篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連句成篇.
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文語言凝練,論點(diǎn)鮮明,條理層次清晰.文章第二段網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn);文章第三段網(wǎng)購的缺點(diǎn);第四段自己的看法.文章使用了that引導(dǎo)的主語從句that online shopping has many advantages over traditional shopping(網(wǎng)上購物有優(yōu)于傳統(tǒng)購物的許多優(yōu)點(diǎn))和定語從句that modern technology brings them(現(xiàn)代科技帶給他們的);only+狀語放在句首的倒裝句Only in this way can people protect themselves while enjoying the convenience from the Internet(僅僅是這種方法人們才能在享受因特網(wǎng)帶來的方便的時(shí)候保護(hù)他們自己).高級(jí)短語和結(jié)構(gòu):First of all首先;What's worse更糟糕的是;On one hand一方面;on the other hand在另一方面.最后一句使用Only in this way can people protect themselves while enjoying the convenience from the Internet僅僅是這種方法人們才能在享受因特網(wǎng)帶來的方便的時(shí)候保護(hù)他們自己,即闡明了自己的觀點(diǎn)還給文章一個(gè)完美的結(jié)束.
解答 With the development of technology,online shopping is becoming increasingly popular these days and has become a symbol of fashion.
It's quite obvious that online shopping has many advantages over traditional shopping.(高分句型一)First of all,people shopping online can enjoy the great convenience that modern technology brings them.In addition,the products online tend to be cheaper than those in traditional stores.What's more,by shopping online,people can save much time,no longer bothering to go to a shopping center.
However,we can't turn a blind eye to the problems with online shopping.On one hand,the quality of the products,in many cases,seems not as superior as it is promised.On the other hand,it is often inconvenient to change products found unsatisfied.(高分句型二)
From my point of view,online shopping should only be used when needed.That's to say,you may buy things you can't find in local markets.Besides,people should never rely too much on the Internet.Regular ways of shopping should never be abandoned.Only in this way can people protect themselves while enjoying the convenience from the Internet.(高分句型三)
點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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