Question

假定你是李華，你的筆友Jane最近總是感覺(jué)身體不適，因此寫(xiě)信向你詢(xún)問(wèn)如何保持健康。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示用英文給她回信。
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．合理飲食；
2．鍛煉身體；
3．保證充足的睡眠，不要熬夜。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)150左右（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Jane,
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

不唯一
Possible version:
Dear Jane,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. But at the same time I’m sorry to hear that you are not very well these days. In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy. Here is my advice.
Firstly, you should keep a balanced diet. You should avoid eating food high in fat and too much sweet food. You’d better eat more fresh vegetables and fruits. Secondly, taking exercise every day helps build a strong body. Why not take more exercise in your spare time? As we all know, regular exercise is an important part of keeping us healthy. Finally, make sure you have enough sleep and you mustn’t stay up too late at night.
By eating properly and exercising regularly, you can keep your body at a proper weight and stay healthy. I truly hope my advice is helpful and you’ll get well soon.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua  

試題分析：這是一篇信件，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目。假定你是李華，你的筆友Jane最近總是感覺(jué)身體不適，因此寫(xiě)信向你詢(xún)問(wèn)如何保持健康。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示用英文給她回信。要點(diǎn)提示：1．合理飲食；2．鍛煉身體；3．保證充足的睡眠，不要熬夜。所以要用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)，且需要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意題目要求詞數(shù)150左右，寫(xiě)的字?jǐn)?shù)不要太多，也不能太少。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于信件作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。