Question

閱讀下面的短文， 然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Gaby Lucy is just a 17-year-old American girl, but she has experienced life in the Dominican Republic as a volunteer. When she recalls her time volunteering there, she doesn’t think about the fact that she had no running water and lived in a small house outside. Instead, she remembers fondly the people she met, the work she did with a youth group to improve accessibility to a local library and the leadership skills she gained.
American teens are setting an example to their parents through their volunteer work, according to a new survey by Harris Interactive. The random national telephone survey released this week found that more teens volunteer to support a charitable cause(慈善事業(yè)) – 56 percent – than have a part-time job –39 percent. Parents said 82 percent of the teens in their lives do something to support charitable causes, including volunteering, inviting others to a cause or donating money.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要點；
2．以約120個詞就 “青少年從事志愿者工作” 這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括以下要點：
(1) 青少年從事志愿者工作的意義；
(2) 簡述一次你自己或你身邊的人從事志愿者工作的經(jīng)歷和感受；
(3) 請你向同齡中學(xué)生發(fā)出號召。
【寫作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

The passage shows a delightful tendency that more teens are volunteering for charitable causes. Such actions set an example to their parents. Gaby Lucy from America is an example.  (29w)
From my point of view, volunteering for charitable causes is of vital importance to teenagers. For, one thing, not only can they acquire far more social experience, but also they can update their skills to deal with different situations in the near future. For another, it helps people in need in the quickest and most direct way, building up a bridge of love among people.
I also once worked as a volunteer in old folks’ home, which I’ll always take pride in. I, together with my group members, helped clean their rooms, washed their clothes and presented a show for them. What impressed me most was that the old folks were so happy to see us that they chatted a lot with us.
In conclusion, volunteer work costs us nothing but helps us gain a lot. Therefore, I hope more teenagers can join us and do what we can to make the world more harmonious.
Summary 2: With the example of Gaby Lucy, a 17-year-old volunteer, once working in Dominican Republic, the writer states that more teenagers are doing voluntary work and they have set good examples to their parents. (33w)

試題分析：這篇書面表達給了一段材料：1．以約30個詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要點； 2．以約120個詞就 “青少年從事志愿者工作” 這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括以下要點： (1) 青少年從事志愿者工作的意義； (2) 簡述一次你自己或你身邊的人從事志愿者工作的經(jīng)歷和感受； (3) 請你向同齡中學(xué)生發(fā)出號召。這道題目要求比較嚴格，所以在寫作之前一定要看清題目。題目還要求你可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
點評：本文屬于根據(jù)原文內(nèi)容寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認真看清題目要求，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。