Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A little kid fell into a lake while she was playing with her little friends. They were too frightening to know what to do next. Unfortunately, a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl. The man immediate dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at a same time, the lady called the ambulance on time. Before the ambulance came, the lady, who proved to be a nurse, performing first aid to the kid. A few of minutes later, the kid sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved. The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of differences. From it, we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better preparing for an emergency.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】frightening →frightened

【2】Unfortunately →Fortunately

【3】immediate →immediately

【4】a →the

【5】on →in

【6】performing →performed

【7】去掉of

【8】sent前加was

【9】differences →difference

【10】preparing →prepared

【解析】

試題分析：一個小孩不慎落水，幸好路人幫忙小孩獲救。故事告訴我們掌握必要急救知識的重要性。

【1】frightening →frightened.考查形容詞。frightening“令人恐懼的”，修飾物；frightened“害怕的，受驚的”，修飾人。此處修飾孩子們用frightened，故frightening 改為frightened。

【2】Unfortunately →Fortunately.考查副詞。一名小孩不慎落水，其他孩子不知怎么辦。恰好兩個成年人經(jīng)過，應(yīng)該是“幸運(yùn)地”，故Unfortunately改為Fortunately。

【3】immediate →immediately.考查副詞。此處修飾動詞dived用副詞，指馬上下水救人，故immediate改為immediately。

【4】a →the.考查冠詞。at the same time“同時”，是固定短語，故a改為the。

【5】on →in.考查介詞短語。on time按時，in time及時。此處指及時叫救護(hù)車，故on改為in。

【6】performing →performed.考查動詞形式。句中主語是the lady，缺少謂語動詞，performing不能作謂語，根據(jù)全文時態(tài)用動詞過去式performed作謂語，故performing改為performed。

【7】去掉of.考查介詞。此處表示“幾分鐘”用a few 直接修飾minutes，故去掉of。

【8】sent前加was.考查時態(tài)語態(tài)。句中the kid和動詞send是被動關(guān)系，指孩子被送到醫(yī)院，用一般過去時的被動，故sent前加was。

【9】differences →difference.考查名詞。make difference“有區(qū)別，關(guān)系重大” difference此處為不可數(shù)名詞，故differences改為difference。

【10】preparing →prepared.考查動詞形式。preparing 表示動作正在進(jìn)行，be prepared for…為……做準(zhǔn)備，過去分詞 prepared 用于系表結(jié)構(gòu)，意思為“為……做好準(zhǔn)備；打算”，故preparing →prepared.