Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的外國朋友 Martin 給你發(fā)來電子郵件，請你幫忙購買一些口罩。請給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 已經(jīng)買到，明天寄出；

2. 給他一些防疫建議（至少兩條）；

3. 問候與祝愿。

注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3. 口罩 mask

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Martin,

I have learned from your email that you are in need of masks. I am writing to tell you that I have bought some for you and that I will mail them tomorrow.

Here are some tips for you to protect you from the virus. First of all, you are supposed to avoid going outside, especially crowded places. When you are out, be sure to wear a mask. In addition, remember to wash your hands frequently with soap under running water. What’s more, doing some sports and drinking more water will be helpful.

I hope you and your family are doing fine there. If there is anything I can do for you, please don’t hesitate to tell me.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，表明口罩已購買并寄出，并給出防疫建議以及表達(dá)對朋友的問候與祝愿。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 表明口罩已經(jīng)買到，明天寄出；

2. 給Martin一些防疫建議（至少兩條）；

3.表達(dá)對Martin的問候與祝愿。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

learn from; be in need of ; protect sb from sth; First of all; be supposed to do sth; be sure to do sth; wear a mask; In addition; wash hands; What’s more; do sports.

第三步：連詞成句

1. I have learned from your email that you are in need of masks.

2. I am writing to tell you that I have bought some for you and that I will mail them tomorrow.

3. Here are some tips for you to protect you from the virus.

4. you are supposed to avoid going outside, especially crowded places.

5. When you are out, be sure to wear a mask.

6. remember to wash your hands frequently with soap under running water.

7. doing some sports and drinking more water will be helpful.

8. If there is anything I can do for you, please don’t hesitate to tell me.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second，And then，Finally，In the end，At last；

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，As well as，not only…but (also)，including；

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：Howeve，On the contrary，but，Although+clause(從句)，In spite of+n/doing，On the one hand…On the other hand…，Some，while others…，as for，so…that…；

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because，As，So，Thus，Therefore，As a result。

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改