Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Last February, I was on holiday in Beijing with my family. One morning, I was sleeping soundly while I was woken up by a suddenly cry of my sister, “It’s snowing.” I got up quickly, dressed me and opened the window. Wow, I couldn’t believe in my eyes. Everything including trees, roofs and grass were covered with thick snow. In distance I saw lots of cars, like small white box, moving slowly on the road. I also saw some lovely birds flying happily in the snow. How a beautiful sight! I became exciting because I had never seen snow before. In no time, I ran out with my camera and take many photos to record my first experience of snow.

Answer 1

【小題1】While改成when
【小題2】suddenly改成sudden
【小題3】me改成myself
【小題4】去掉in
【小題5】were改成was
【小題6】in后面加the
【小題7】box改成boxes
【小題8】How改成what
【小題9】exciting改成excited
【小題10】take改成took

解析試題分析：文章介紹作者和家人到北京旅游，遇到人生中經歷的第一次雪的事情。
【小題1】當我被姐姐的突然的叫喊吵醒的時候，我睡的很沉。While引導時間狀語從句，表示一段時間，when引導時間狀語從句表示時間點，因為被吵醒是時間點，所以用when
【小題2】suddenly是副詞，修飾動詞或形容詞，這里修飾cry，用形容詞sudden
【小題3】我趕緊起床，穿好衣服，打開窗戶。Dress oneself穿衣服，me改成myself
【小題4】我不敢相信自己的眼睛。Believe是相信，believe in是“信任”，去掉in
【小題5】一切包括樹，屋頂和草都是被厚厚的雪覆蓋了。Everything 做主語，謂語是單數：were改成was
【小題6】在遠處“in the distance”這是固定短語：in后面加the
【小題7】我看見很多汽車，就象白色的盒子在街上移動。指cars用復數：box改成boxes
【小題8】多么漂亮的景色。感嘆句中How修飾形容詞或副詞，what修飾名詞
【小題9】我很興奮，因為我從沒有看過雪。修飾人，用excited
【小題10】很快我?guī)е�照相機跑出去拍下我第一次下雪的經歷。和ran并列用一般過去式：take改成took
考點：考查短文改錯