Question

最近，學(xué)校以高考臨近學(xué)習(xí)緊張為名，擬取消高三體育課，引發(fā)了同學(xué)們的不滿。假如你是高三（1）班班長(zhǎng)李華，代表全班同學(xué)給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，反對(duì)取消體育課。具體要求如下：
1. 主要內(nèi)容：理由、要求和建議
2. 詞數(shù)要求：100左右
3. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞匯。
Dear principal,
I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 1, Senior 3...
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Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear principal,
I am Li Hua, monitor of class 1, senior Grade 3. I am writing to report us students’ opinions on our PE classes being cancelled.
Facing the coming college entrance examination, we Grade 3 students all feel stressful. One of the effective means of reducing our pressure is taking exercise including having PE classes. That is why my classmates felt frustrated and helpless when hearing your decision. We believe taking exercise can keep us more healthy, more energetic to improve our grade. It can also strengthen our friendship and we can do less for more when learning. As the saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack dull boy. Considering all the above, we sincerely hope that you do not cancel our PE classes therefore. By the way, having one more PE class each week is welcome. Thank you!
Yours
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本文是一篇材料作文，比較簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作的要求和目的。學(xué)生在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題。這是寫給校長(zhǎng)的一封信，首先要介紹自己，然后說(shuō)出自己的目的，并且說(shuō)明理由，最后寫上自己的希望。一般給領(lǐng)導(dǎo)寫信都是這樣的。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了一些信件中的常用語(yǔ)，如：. I am writing to ……這是說(shuō)出寫信目的的常用語(yǔ)。另外還用了一些分詞做狀語(yǔ)的結(jié)構(gòu)，如：Facing the coming college entrance examination, we Grade 3 students all feel stressful.從句，如：That is why my classmates felt frustrated and helpless when hearing your decision.這些為文章增色不少。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。