Question

李華準(zhǔn)備到外企求職，必須具備一定的英語(yǔ)水平。請(qǐng)發(fā)e­mail告知他學(xué)英語(yǔ)的方法。
提示：1.養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣(如……)；
2.多看英語(yǔ)電視節(jié)目和電影，擴(kuò)大詞匯量；
3.要有自信；多講，多用，不要怕出錯(cuò)。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.電子郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好(不計(jì)入你所寫(xiě)詞數(shù))；
3.以第一人稱(chēng)寫(xiě)。
Dear Li Hua，
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Yours，
Deanne

Answer 1

Dear Xiao Ming,
I’m glad to offer you some advice.
In my opinion, forming good habits to learn English is very important, such as reading aloud, listening to English songs and communicating with native speakers of English. Fortunately, you have easy access to English because there are English programmes on TV and English films . Also, reading can often enlarge your vocabulary, which may be the biggest challenge for you. In addition, you should have confidence in yourself. Try to speak English whenever possible, just as a proverb goes, practice makes perfect. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, you are sure to improve your English.
I hope that my advice will be helpful.
Yours,
Deanne

解析試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。李華準(zhǔn)備到外企求職，必須具備一定的英語(yǔ)水平。請(qǐng)發(fā)e­mail告知他學(xué)英語(yǔ)的方法。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書(shū)信類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】In my opinion, forming good habits to learn English is very important, such as reading aloud, listening to English songs and communicating with native speakers of English.這句話(huà)是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，F(xiàn)ortunately, you have easy access to English because there are English programmes on TV and English films . 這句話(huà)里面用了原因狀語(yǔ)從句和have access to這個(gè)詞組， reading can often enlarge your vocabulary, which may be the biggest challenge for you.這句話(huà)里面用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句 Try to speak English whenever possible, just as a proverb goes, practice makes perfect. 這句話(huà)用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句和省略，還有諺語(yǔ)，還有考生要學(xué)習(xí)使用Also, In addition,等關(guān)聯(lián)詞
考點(diǎn)：考查書(shū)信類(lèi)短文