Question

假定你是中學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Paul想了解一下中國(guó)的用餐習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)寫一封英文郵件向他作簡(jiǎn)要介紹。要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 主人請(qǐng)客人先人座；
2. 使用筷子進(jìn)餐；
3. 吃飯不出聲響;.
4. 客人先動(dòng)筷子；
5. 餐畢客人向主人致謝。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Paul,
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Paul,
You mentioned you are interested in Chinese table manners, so I’m writing to give you a brief introduction.
When a dinner begins, the host will invite the guests to get seated first. Then one major feature you should remember in China is that we use chopsticks instead of knife and fork, and everyone should try to avoid making unpleasant noise while eating. Whenever a dish is served, the guests are supposed to try it first. Of course, as guests, we should express our thanks to the host after enjoying the dinner.
Such are the basic tips about Chinese table manners. All in all, “When in China, do as the Chinese do” is your best choice.  (115 words)
Yours truly,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本題為材料作文，根據(jù)高考的評(píng)分要求，從兩個(gè)方面分析題目。一是內(nèi)容：文中要求寫到的是五個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，即形成了文章的主體。五個(gè)內(nèi)容之間要具有連貫性且要有開頭和結(jié)尾，形成一定的邏輯。二是語(yǔ)言方面。要有精華的句子，起到畫龍點(diǎn)晴的作用。例如，固定結(jié)構(gòu)，倒裝，強(qiáng)調(diào)等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文開頭緊扣題目，起到了開篇點(diǎn)題的作用。再者文中用到了表語(yǔ)從句，讓步狀語(yǔ)從句等，使文章有一定的氣勢(shì)，同時(shí)，結(jié)尾總結(jié)與第一自然段形成了開頭與結(jié)尾的呼應(yīng)。
考點(diǎn): 考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言的綜合運(yùn)用能力