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【題目】假定你是高二1班的李華，你的朋友美國學生Chris給你發(fā)郵件說他對中國的太極拳很感興趣，想學習，請你給些建議。請根據以下要點給他寫回信。

內容包括：1. 簡單介紹太極拳。例如：是中國傳統武術的一種；大約400年歷史；全球有3億太極拳練習者，等等。2. 給Chris幾條有關學習太極拳的建議。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

可能用到的詞匯：Tai Chi太極拳；martial art武術：

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris,

I am very glad to know that you are willing to learn Tai Chi, which is a kind of traditional Chinese martial art with a history of about 400 years There are about 0.3 billion players throughout the world

By practicing Tai Chi, not only can you build up your body, but also you can release your stress. Before you start, first, get an experienced coach who can teach you standard movements. Second, do warm-up exercise before practicing, regulate your breath and focus on what you are doing Lastly, be sure to practice it every day and don’t give up halfway.

I am sure you will make great progress if you keep on doing it.

Yours

Li Hun

【解析】本文書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封書信。

第1步：根據提示可知，本篇是一封書信：你的朋友美國學生Chris給你發(fā)郵件說他對中國的太極拳很感興趣，想學習，請你給些建議。請根據以下要點給他寫回信。內容包括：1. 簡單介紹太極拳。例如：是中國傳統武術的一種；大約400年歷史；全球有3億太極拳練習者，等等。2. 給Chris幾條有關學習太極拳的建議。

第2步：根據寫作要求確定關鍵詞，如：learn Tai Chi（學太極）；a kind of traditional Chinese martial art（中國傳統武術）；build up your body（增強你的身體）；make great progress（取得大的進步）等。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

本文是一封書信，格式正確，內容齊全，結構布局合理，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。I am very glad to know that you are willing to learn Tai Chi, which is a kind of traditional Chinese martial art with a history of about 400 years句中使用that引導的賓語從句和which引導的非限制性定語從句；By practicing Tai Chi, not only can you build up your body, but also you can release your stress.句中使用部分倒裝；who can teach you standard movements.句中who引導定語從句；另外，By practicing Tai Chi, Before you start, first, Second, Lastly,等的運用為文章增色添彩。