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16．假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修舒中高一統(tǒng)考英語第9頁（共10頁）舒中高一統(tǒng)考英語第10頁（共10頁）改．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線\劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Last summer I did some fruit-picking．It is pretty hard work，though．I had to start in 7 a．m．a(chǎn)nd picked for a good eight hours．But it was such cheerful and full of fun．Some of we had guitars，so in the evenings we had barbecues and played a bit music together．I only got about $80 a week，but at the least they gave me all my meals，and the food was not that awfully．Basic accommodation was also supplying．Still，I'm afraid I won't be going fruit-picking this summer，because I've got a temporary（臨時的） job in town what pays better．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文講述了去年暑假摘水果的經(jīng)歷和感受．

解答 Last summer I did some fruit-picking．It is pretty hard work，though．I had to start in 7 a．m．a(chǎn)nd picked for a good eight hours．But it was such cheerful and full of fun．Some of we had guitars，so in the evenings we had barbecues and played a bit∧music together．I only got about $80 a week，but at the least they gave me all my meals，and the food was not that awfully．Basic accommodation was also supplying．Still，I'm afraid I won't be going fruit-picking this summer，because I've got a temporary（臨時的） job in town what pays better．
詳解：
1．is改為was；考查動詞的時態(tài)，本文講述去年夏天發(fā)生的事情，故用一般過去時．
2．in改為at；考查介詞，當(dāng)時間具體到幾點鐘時前面要用介詞at．
3．picked改為pick；考查并列結(jié)構(gòu)，此處pick和前面的start是并列成分，用在情態(tài)動詞had to之后，故用動詞原形．
4．such改為so；考查副詞，such是形容詞，用在名詞之前，so是副詞，用在形容詞或副詞之前，這里cheerful是形容詞，故用so．
5．we改為us；考查人稱代詞，介詞of后面要跟人稱代詞的賓格形式．
6．bit后面加of；考查固定短語，of是介詞，在這里后面跟名詞music作賓語，a bit 修飾動詞、形容詞、副詞和比較級．
7．去掉the；考查冠詞，at  least是固定搭配，意為"至少"，通常位于句中，at the least 也有"至少"的意思，但通常位于句首，后面要用逗號隔開．
8．a(chǎn)wfully改為awful；考查形容詞，此處用形容詞形式作系動詞was的表語．
9．supplying改為supplied；考查動詞的語態(tài)，Basic accommodation 與動詞supply是動賓關(guān)系，故用過去分詞supplied與was構(gòu)成被動語態(tài)．
10．what改為that/which；考查關(guān)系代詞，分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個定語從句，用關(guān)系代詞that/which指代job在從句中作主語．

點評 短文改錯題首先要整體理解短文意思，抓住中心思想，結(jié)合語境和上下文關(guān)系，充分運用平時掌握的固定搭配，習(xí)慣用法，句型結(jié)構(gòu)等等來發(fā)現(xiàn)文章的錯誤之處，加以修正．