Question

Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, but I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere on class. I decided to make best of it. I work hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were seldom available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, which greatly increased my confident and got me motivated.
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it which determines who you are.

Answer 1

【小題1】a→an
【小題2】disappointing→disappointied
【小題3】去掉but
【小題4】on→in
【小題5】best前加the
【小題6】work→worked
【小題7】seldom→always
【小題8】student→students
【小題9】confident→confidence
【小題10】which→that

解析試題分析：本文通過(guò)自己從考試不及格到成為一共尖子生的轉(zhuǎn)變告訴我們：態(tài)度決定高度》
【小題1】a→an考查冠詞。根據(jù)后面形容詞important是元音音素開(kāi)頭，用an ,所以a 改成an .
【小題2】disappointing→disappointied 考查形容詞，--ed結(jié)尾的形容詞指人，感到….,----ing 結(jié)尾的形容詞指物，令人…,根據(jù)后面主語(yǔ)是我，所以是感到失望，所以
【小題3】去掉but。考查連詞。前面有連詞as盡管，雖然，不能與but連用，所以去掉but。
【小題4】on→in考查介詞。根據(jù)固定短語(yǔ)：in class，在課上，所以把on改成in。
【小題5】best前加the考查冠詞。根據(jù)固定短語(yǔ)：make the best of 充分利用，所以在best前加the .
【小題6】work→worked 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文講述的是三年以前的經(jīng)歷，所以應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以work改成worked。
【小題7】seldom→always 考查副詞和句意。句意：無(wú)論何時(shí)我遇到困難，他們總是愿意提供幫助。Seldom，幾乎不，always，總是，一直，所以seldom改成always。
【小題8】student→students 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)短語(yǔ)：one …，…中的一個(gè)，后跟復(fù)數(shù)名詞，所以student改成students.
【小題9】confident→confidence考查詞性。根據(jù)前面my + 名詞，而confident是形容詞，所以改成名詞形式：confidence。
【小題10】which→that 考查連詞，根據(jù)固定句型：It was …that…構(gòu)成強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，所以把which改成that。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。